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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person Sabrina
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter. Keep up the good work. Please update soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that you have a GREAT vacation!!! As much as I would LOVE to read a whole lot of this story within the next week, I want you to take some time for you!!!

Part 11, Chapter Nine: Goodnight, Demon Slayer...

Praise given to you is deserved!!! This chapter started out with a good bit of fun & humor & ended with giving me chill bumps, tears & a lump in my throat!!!

I very much enjoyed this part:
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that you have a GREAT vacation!!! As much as I would LOVE to read a whlot lot of this story within the next week, I want you to take some time for you!!!

Part 11, Chapter Nine: Goodnight, Demon Slayer...

Praise given to you is deserved!!! This chapter started out with a good bit of fun & humor & ended with giving me chill bumps, tears & a lump in my throat!!!

I very much enjoyed this part:
person Sabrina
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Please update soon.
person Zephyr
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolness.. I can\'t wait for your next chappie!

This was awesome.. just like Snape to jusbuy anything and then alter it later..
person amsev
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(snip)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 11, Chapter Eight: If I Throw A Stick Will You Leave?....

Playing catch up once again!!! Mega Pooh decor & Severus in the same room for the whole summer... Poor Severus is going to be a bit nutters by the time he gets back to Hogwarts;-)

I really like the insight you gave us to both Severus & Hermione in this chapter!!! Severus longing for the love that Hermione has with her fy & y & what he learned about her & her family!!! I look forward to them finding out more about each other as well as themselves!!!

I like Severus\' reasoning behind the clothes he bought!!! I would LOVE to see him in those red boxers, bet Hermione wouldn\'t mind either!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how you bring Lavender backto tto the story as well as watching the relationship between Severus & Hermione grow!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<

P.S., Lucky you, even if Edge is married you got to see him in person!!! I have to make due with seeing him on tv:(
person GrrArrg
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"I\'m crazy? Honey, I\'m the original one-eyed chicklet in the kingdom of the blind\"


Fantabulous chappie!!

Disney Winnie the Pooh, Angel and red boxers just about sums up my favourite bits!!

The mental imagary was perfect, I love this Hermione and Severus!!

More plz

Kisses
GrrArrg
person GrrArrg
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"I\'m crazy? Honey, I\'m the original one-eyed chicklet in the kingdom of the blind\"


Fantabulous chappie!!DisnDisney Winnie the Pooh, Angel and red boxers just about sums up my favourite bits!!

The mental imagary was perfect, I love this Hermione and Severus!!

More plz

Kisses
GrrArrg
person FireBlade
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. that was so f---ing funny. I mean that beginning it makes you think he is being tortured by at least Hermione but nope its was just his ROOM!! LOL and i loved that ending! Awesome dont ever STOP! Love it