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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person Kate McGuire
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I enjoy the lunge/riposte of Snape and Hermione\'s banter. Yes they may be just slightly out of character but not for a comedy/romance. I love the song too.It reminds me of Beastie by Jethro Tull. That song is the perfect description of a Boggart.
person ArienAstera
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person spaz141
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You crack me up! Sad, yet brilliant and funny. The children, the banter...just brilliant.
Thanks
L & K favourite minion #4.
person Sabrina
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter. Another cliffhanger, but I will forgive you if you update soon. (which you are doing a great job of by the way.)
person ArienAstera
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was fast!! I was just catching up on all the other stories, but when the page refreshed I thought \"Holy crap!! She updated again!?\" Thats great, but do you really have to stop there and wait for 10 whole reviews? What about... three. Isn\'t that enough to end that horrible cliffie? Would it count if I reviewed more than once? But this is a great story so I\'m sure you\'ll get 10 in no time at all.

I\'ll just wait and be miserable...

ArienAstera
person spaz141
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! You are too funny. So who\'s the other girl? I ca eve even guess, I can\'t think ny ony other muggle born witches other than Hermione and...Penelope Clearwater. Draco, the big baby, cracks me up. Thanks for the update.
L&K Favourite Minion #4.
person FireBlade
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t know how i missed chapter 11\'s update but yeah. ANyways, I have to save that im loving this story but that ending if the girl is who i think it is then im really confused but if it si not then i am sorta confused. Tho this is an awesome awesome story adn you have to continue!
person GrrArrg
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Babes

That was so sad and so unexpected.

I thought it would just be a humourous evening for them,
I had no idea how you were going to use the song.

I loved the \"How much do you love me?\" part, I still do that now when I want something!!

Iso gso glad that you are on holiday now and I hope to see many more chapters soon!!

Kisses and bunnies
GrrArrg
person fresh8
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aha! great to see you update so soon.
person azulkan2
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil writer, argh................cliffy! I can\'t stand it. I need more soon....please.