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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person ancientgirl
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I have to say I myself hate Robin Hood Prince of thieves, but I have the extended version only because Alan Rickman is in it. I love that Hermione things Severus looks like the Sherrif, that was very cute. And I love his not wanting to admit he likes watchingfy. fy. The playfulness is great. I can\'t wait for your next chapter.
person spaz141
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I almost peed my pants - Mom Likes Me Best! TOO funny. Then the Robin Hood movie - I was laughing so loud my daughter came to check up on me. Priceless. And then you finish with Hot Old Guys! LMAO. Now that Severus has realised that he likes Hermione...will he do anything about it? Can\'t wait to find out.

As for the reviews - I\'ve been having such a hard time with this site.metimetimes I have to try three or four times to get my review to post. That may be a reason for the low number of reviews.

L&K FM#4
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think your timing for your vacation was PERFECT & I do hope that you enjoy the movie!!! I can\'t go until the 4:20 showing, my daughter has young authors day tomorrow & I do what I can to show my support to FANTASTIC & proven Authors (hint, hint) as well as budding talent!!!

I do believe that I know who the mudblood is, but if I\'m wrong I don\'t want everyone to know;-)

Part 13, Chapter Eleven: Your Computer Beat Me At Chess. I Beat It At Kickboxing...

I really do enjoy the humor in this chapter!!! I can just see Hermione calling Severus a drama queen!!! The bit about the computer & Hermione cooking/poisoning him were too funny!!! I have to say that the t-shirt part has to be my favorite, both sweet & funny!!!

Too bad that storm shortened his shower, but I do think he enjoyed spending his time with Hermione much more than just whacking it to thoughts of her;-) He also learned a lot during that time, her fear, the fact that she likes older men & most importantly, his true feelings for her!!! It reaaly was quite the productive evening, though not as reproductive as I\'m sure he\'d have liked!!!

Can\'t wait to see what will happen next!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I am really enjoying these chapter titles, some of them are not only appropriate, but amusing in & of themselves*
person azulkan2
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know, 10,000 lashes with a wet noodle for not reviewing. Some days the brain is just to fried from work to put coherant words together into a sentance. Or to know how to spell. Great story. Loved the spoiled Draco. Want to know who the mudblood was that was servicing Lucius? More soon please.
person GrrArrg
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter!! Favourite parts:

person Red Writing Hood
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have got me hooked on this story. I love it...now, Im just wondering who this \'mudblood\' is!

Red
person GrrArrg
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Most Sweaty-Naughty-Feelings-Causing One!

I loved this chapter, Father and Son together.

I liked that Lucius was straight with him, get in my way and I\'ll kill you!!

That\'s my Lucius!!

But what next? I want more!!!

Kisses
GrrArrg

P.s Officially I\'t mat making the robots any more, but for you....
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Susan
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mean Potions Mistress....calling us Minions. LOL. What a good chapter. Bless you for having such insight into the plight of children. You are doing so well with this story. I truly appreciate the updates and would LOVE to see new chappies before you go on vacation. (ps. Have a great time)
person Susan
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry. Crappy typing in previous post prevented me from posting my email. I never post anonymous. :-D Cheers and thanks again