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for Goodnight, Demon Slayer

by PotionsMistressM

person FireBlade
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Loved it, you must keep going!!!
person Jeanette
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Real Life, I can understand that. Still I was gald to see an update as I am enjoying this tale. Keep Writing. Jeanette
person Becky
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another brilliant chapter. I want a chivalrous Severus it\'s just not fair. Sorry if this reveiew is sort of garbled but it\'s 12.32am and \'m off to scotland at 5.50am i am meeting Juliet Landau , Vincent Chartheiser. Andy Hallet, Julie Benz and a few other Buffy and Angel cast members at a convention this weekend and i\'m kind of wired. (i \'ve met them all before cuz i steward and they are all lovely. James Marsters is still the best though he gives big hugs and he kissed me on the lips !! he really did!!). Please update soon as i am quite addicted. Sorboutbout the evil workplace by th way keep your chin up hun we luv ya!

Thanx

Becky XXXXX
person ArienAstera
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a completely sweet and fluffy chapter! *sigh* They\'re so perfect for each other...
person ramenmaiden
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please do update, the last chapter is such a cliffhanger! I have been obsessively checking several times a day for updates since I read this fic in its entireity at 1 in the morning some days ago. Your writing style is very involving, fluid, and addictive, please keep up the good work and update for all our sakes.
person Teah
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where\'s the new chapter??? I\'ve been waiting ageees and I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to know whats gonna happen next! I love your story so much so please please please update.
person Becky
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story really enjoying it. I just wanted to ask did you have Snape channeling Spike through the party chaps cuz you have him wearing Spikes clothes ( the infamous Black jeans , T-shirt and red over shirt, all he\'s missing is the coat), and he keeps calling Hermione Love and stuff like that. I know you love the Buffy refs, who does\'nt? but i was not sure wether the spike channeling was deliberate or not. Loving this anyway please keep it coming.

Becky XXXXX
person Selene Luavea
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I take it we\'re going with the Spike look for Severus this time around? Nice. Very nice. Two of my favorite men being combined (at least style-wise). I guess he\'s been watching too much Buffy and Angel. Which is not a bad thing. :)
person GrrArrg
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things I loved:

The thousands of stolen BtVS lines!! (Okay two)

You three were in on this? Isn\'t that a sign of the apocalypse?\" she screamed disbelievingly.

\"Watching too much \"Buffy\" and affecting Californian speech patterns much?\"- Yuh huh!!

Back pedal, back pedal, you crazy, dirty old man!

smoochies *sigh*

More please

Kisses
GrrArrg
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 15, Chapter Thirteen: Check, No More Butt Monkey.........

This chapter is PERFECT!!! I didn\'t see it coming, the conspiring together of Severus, Harry & Ron, that was FABULOUS!!! I am glad that it was a joke because Neville didn\'t deserve a real hex!!! Maybe you can hook him up with someone before the party is over, he needs some lovin\'!!!

I really think that you did a BEAUTIFUL job of having them admit their feelings to each other!!! I can\'t wait to see where you take them from this point, but for the sake of the party guests (who may not be able to survive the shock from seeing that kiss) I hope you lead them to another room;-) Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<