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by philodoxfianna

person SexyLexy
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hei! you didn\'t write a sequel!! why?? I\'m really mad at you!! Do you need any help? Cosmo@flx.it bye!!
person Angie/Les`
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey update soon ary try to write longer chapters. The length of the chapters is one thing that holds a readers attention, alongside a great story. You are on the right track. Keep writing.