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for Control

by SelenaSnape

person me
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i don\'t really understand what\'s going on. very jumpy and not very good. could be if you explained it.
person Nicole
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m liking this. It\'s getting really good. I want to really really know what\'s up with the whole mind-control thing. MUST HAVE MORE CHAPTERS!!!! AAAAHHHH......can\'t wait.
person Jynn
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so far i like this story. i havent read one like it and it seems really kool. i would say pdate soon but your ahead of me, so ill say if ya havent finished this fic do so please cuz its a good one.
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you going to update anytime soon.
cause its good and you just left and havent updated,
person Helen
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello,
this fic is great,
are you planning to update it,
hope you do because its fabs
person Mel
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ho boy.... OUCH. They made out on Harry\'s trunk??? That made me laugh. I loved it. Come on you two!! Start the smutfest!!! Lots of smut. Smut smut smut smut...
person genrou
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i first saw this fic at dark haven and there were only 3 chapters there. being hooked and wanting more, i looked around for more. i found two more chapters-which by the way added some confusion..well really only chapter 5 with the time jumps and other character involvement. but alas, it seems that this story has been abonded for a yr. is it ever going to get continued?
person FORBIDDEN
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
loved it
are you going to update
person will
schedule October 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
will this ever be updated? cause i wish it was im really enjoying it ats rts really great
person Temptation
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What the? I\'m so terribly confused. What exactly is going on? Still, its a good story, cant wait till you update.