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Ah, there\'s the future Death Eater lurking in the lonely/abused boy. Barter being the oldest system of trade in the world. Her response will be fascinating.

HAhahahahaha. I love teenage boys. So fantastically predictable. Sorry can\'t get more detailed... know that I love it and am waiting for more!

brill,brill and brill write more very quickly i want to know what is going to happen...............

This is going to sound so fangirlish of me, but *squee*! *ahem* Sorry, but that just seems like such a 15 year old loner Snape thing to say. Poor guy.

OMG *falls over laughing* Great story I love it!

Your story is very good so far. I can\'t wait for each chapter come out and was quite suprised with the ending of the last chapter (6). Excellent. Please continue. I can\'t wait.

Breasts? He wants to touch her breasts? Either he doesn\'t know how much she wants it, otherwise he would have asked for more, or breasts are enough to satisfy his teenage hormone lust for many a lonely nights for him where his only companion in bed is a bottle of lotion. Can\'t wait to read what Hermione does next. I can guess as this is adult fanion,ion, but be sure to make sure it\'s slow with lots of anticipation. Will Severus just GRAB them and will Hermione have to \"teach\" him how to touch a girl/woman or will he inately know how to seductively touch them to bring a woman to her knees? Make sure the next chapter is good and long with lots of details. I want very explicit detail as to what Severus will do to her.

For starters, I woud really appreciate it if you could send me a note when you update!!!

Chapters 4-6... I am very impressed by how you are writing these characters!!! I\'m not too fond of Severus\' father & you can tell that he had a huge bearing on how Severus turned out!!!

I must say that the last line in cer 6er 6 made mele*

WHOA!!! I wasn\'t expecting that, altough I guess I should have! Love this story. I\'m not usually a huge fan of time turner fics, but I like this one. Hehe! And Snape said he wasn\'t interested in girls at that age! LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIRE!!! Hehehe!

LOL~ i was expecting he wanted a kisssomesomething! *darn* there went all my romantic ideas for this story...jk. Just wanted to tell ya, this is a great story! I hope you update soon!