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Oh man... You NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! Lol, youve got a loyal fan now! ~Jenni~

Oh, evil cliffie! I like this story, young Severus seems in character, as far as twisting a dissadvantage into an advantage. Very Slytherin.

elementaldeity

Leave it to the wonders of adolescence to prevail ;-) That last line tickled me...it\'s nice to know the cool and calm potions master we all know and love was once as as chemically imbalanced as the rest of us. Good job :-)

Your last posted chapter was interesting, as always. I found it slightly odd that he asked to touch her breasts. I mean, why not ask to have sex with her or something of that nature? Does it play into the story later on (why he asked just to touch her breasts)?
I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Interng, ng, I never considered Severus\' parent being a teacher. Typical boy in the chapter, maybe some comic relief coming? thanks for the double update.

*Snorts* What an absolutely horrid way to leave us all hanging! I like this story, but I think you need to have her get caught up in her lies. You make lying sound so easy...and it is not.

LMAO! I want to touch your breats... How typical. lol. I\'m still laughing. Hermione is a Gryffindor after all, so I guess she shouldn\'t have any trouble complying. Although, I would like to see some other complications. This seems a bit too easy. Can\'t wait to read about Hermione\'s reaction. Severus seems very much in character. Cheerio,
TESA

P.S. I really hope there will be some interaction between Hermione and the Marauders. Are you planning to portray them in an evil light? I really hope so... For some reason I really don\'t like Lily, James or Sirius. I get the impression that they were arrogant. Remus is just too nice to be mean.

What a neat story! I\'m really enjoying your twist on the time travel idea :)

Wow, I\'m glad upd updated this. I wonder what this potion does and why its so important. I\'m also curious as to how far Hermione will go to get it, I\'m hoping she will go quite far.

Bet she wasn\'t expecting that one.

Looking forward to more story!