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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I really enjoyed this chapter. It veered off from the atmosphere you had previously set and into something much deeper. I loved Hermione\'s inner conflict over the situation and then her resolution to simply do it - feeling disconnected from everything when it finally started to happen. It seemed like a very appropriate response. Looking forward to more of this.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, this is getting pretty interesting. Will she eventually get the potion? hmmm.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... I LOVE all of the inner-battle that Hermione went through!!! I am wondering what else will happen between them before she gets the sample & returns?!? Can\'t wait to find out!!!
I hope that Things settle down for you & am looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
I hope that Things settle down for you & am looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. I like the way Severus is shy in a way. Please keep writing.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now it\'s starting to get good. There\'s something so fun about sex games (when you read them), the power play, who will dominate, who will control? Now if *I* were Hermione, I would step closer and move his mouth to my nipple. Like a babe at breast, under her control. YUM! Will Severus give all reason over to his \"dumbstick\"? Hope so. How did that song long ago go? Oh yeah, \"Teach me, tonight.\" Teach, baby, teach! MORE!!!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very good story so far. I don\'t stop by adultff that often, so hopefully I\'ll be able to find it on Lord and Lady Snape, soon? Looking forward to more of your story.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHH.
Complex teen this one. I like this three dimentional charachter.
Complex teen this one. I like this three dimentional charachter.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
There\'s suspense, there\'s angst (poor young Snape!), there are the manipulative \"good guys\", then there\'s more suspense as I read more of the story... love it ^__^
Interesting point about telling truth/lie and mindreading, btw.
I am looking forward for more :-)
There\'s suspense, there\'s angst (poor young Snape!), there are the manipulative \"good guys\", then there\'s more suspense as I read more of the story... love it ^__^
Interesting point about telling truth/lie and mindreading, btw.
I am looking forward for more :-)
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful pair of chapters. I laughed out loud at the \"I want to touch your breats\" comment. SO typical of a teenaged boy.
lol.. the connection between my name and slytherin is merely a happy coincidence, although I might adopt it as my reason *grins*
This story is awesome I hope you update soon.
lol.. the connection between my name and slytherin is merely a happy coincidence, although I might adopt it as my reason *grins*
This story is awesome I hope you update soon.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE IT!! I\'ve been inspired to write my own HGSS fic! PLEASE UPDATE SOON