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Excellent Chapter. I don\'t think young Sev is quite ready for what Hermione has in store for him *cackles* looking forwards to more.

Clarinet,

This is wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it. I love the interplay between Hermione and Severus. All the way though I\'m constantly reminded that everytime Prof S. deals with her, he has this in mind. No great wonder he sent her back. I can\'t wait to see how it ends up.

Thank you, Thank you, THANK YOU for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m so happy (shining eyes). I just saw the new yesterday and now I get a new chapter in your fic too!!!!!!!!!! Yay! Rawr! What a little incubus young Sevie is! How can he be so unknowledgeable when he\'s so proficient (wink wink). Once again, love their interaction. Hermione\'s inner dialogue is quite amusing considering the situation she\'s in when she\'s having it. I certainly couldn\'t be having an mental diatribe while he was providing such bliss. She\'s cinlyinly talented. Hope for the next chapter soon! Thanks again for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Will Hermione be sharing her conclusion about the tears with Severus? Hopefully it will not be immediately, however...quite definitely looking forward to the next chapter!

Glad you\'re back & hoour our business trip was enjoyable!!! Before the review I just wanted to say something about the response you wrote to me below... I am sorry to hear that you lost readers, BUT I am glad that you have stuck to your story, the way that you want to write it!!! I feel that one of the most important things in writing is to stay true to yourself as far as where you want your story to go!!!

Chapter 8... I find this chapter to be quite interesting!!! This is a nice look into the way that both of these characters are feeling & thinking as well as them learning a bit about each other & themselves!!! I am looking forward to part 2 of this to see what they will do & how much more they will learn of each other!!! Til chapter 9, Deb >^..^<

Oh my! What\'s going to happen next? I look forward to finding out. Thanks for the update.

EXCELLENT!! I really like that Hermione is older than Severus; I\'ve never seen any other do that and I\'m surprised at how well it works or rather how well you\'ve made it work. Even though he\'s young and inexperienced I\'m still fluttering... And And now I\'m thinking about that last scene again, please update! I\'m begging you!!

Eek! I so love young Sev! He is so dark and broody, yet young and unsure! Such a good mix! Didnt\' say he \"only\" wanted to see her breasts indeed, cocky little bastard! Excellent chapter, as well as the ones preceeding it. I hadn\'t been to check to see if you had updated in a while and I had several chapters to read, which was nice. Hope you update soon, that was a wicked cliffie you left us with!

*cackles evily* That was a wonderful chapter. The battle for control was very insteresting - well written and really IC.
Please WMS. This story is soo gooood!

That was sweet!
\"only breast?\", well, I like that line because it was so juvenile.