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That was a very heady chapter. Thanks for the update. I look forward to the next.

Chapter Nine: Intercourse con consequences (Part 2: Severus)... This chapter is FABULOUS & gave a great deal of insight to Severus\' life & it really makes me feel so sad for him!!! Had he been treated better, treated right then he would have seen things from a different pertivetive, but all he knows is the feeling of being mistreated & finds it hard to just let go & trust!!! It makes his turning his wand on Hermione make perfect sense, as much as he tried to feel, he just doesn\'t really know how!!! I really can\'t wait to see where you take this next & am very curious to see how you end this (which will be here too soon since I am really LOVING this story)!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<


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hey dont abandon the story k?Wish I could write this good!

Terrific Chapter. Though I got thinking and now I\'m not sure if I\'m more sorry for Young Sev for being royally fucked up, or for the Adult Sev who saw Hermionein his class first year and was like \"what the??\" I have a feeling being either would kinda suck. Looking forward to more!

omg nuuuu~! You must update rightaway! Dont leave me hanging =[ email me when you do? Also..id like to see hermione and older snape have some \"interaction\" when she gets back XD

Aw, yet another wonderfully written s...w...with more action going on (yay!). I was curious as to why Snape would refer to Hermione as his lover? Was it sitting up for something done the road or just merely a thought of Snape\'s at the time? I thought it was creative how you said \"the Devil in a girl\' shape\" instead of saying something like \'the devil in disguise\' or something else equally overused. Throughout the story you have great sentences like \"...her feelings did not poison him like other people...\". I normally don\'t use when authors use the word penis during a sexy scene but I thought that it was very tastefully used in \"her mouth was soft and warm on his penis,\" it really felt the feel of the passage. Very rude way to end the chapter....Great way, mind you, from an author

Oh My gosh! That was so awesome!You just have to write more!Don\'t keep me waiting k?

Hey!This story is awesome!Please write more!I\'m gonna die if I can\'t read anymore!

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UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You left us hanging about what \'Mione is going to do to young Sevy! Inquiring minds want to know! Please Please Please!!!!!!

That\'s it?! That\'s as long as you made the chapter?! I can\'t believe it! It\'s such an interesting story ... I look forward to the next installment ...