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Wicked Chapter!Wish My mind was as creative as yours!LOL!

Please take my last comment as a compliment, I meant it to be. I\'m kind of sad, something apparently quite powerful happens between them and she can\'t really do a thing about it. Brilliant. Thanks for the update.

Ah..So should i take that as a \"no\"? hehe..Wow, this story is starting to take some very interesting twists. Poor young Sev, Hermione wants to rape him XD ..Well i\'m not sure exactly how this is going to progress..But i was just saying i hoped that older Snape would have a few happy memories of her when she got back. Mail me when you update!

Chapter Eleven : I put a spell on you... I am still not caught up in my reading, BUT I had to read this when I saw itted*ted*

I am so sorry that I did not review the last chapter *wipes away the river of tears.* It was a great chapter...
Wow--I can\'t believe that you updated so soon. It was very pleasing to see that you had, to say the least. I love the spell that gown-up Snape put on Hermione--where did you come up with the idea? You made Snape cry? Why? That was very sad to read ... Since Hermione and younger Snape were so \'close\' when she was on her mission, are we going to see them become close again? I can\'t wait until you update again (you should update before Friday :D )!

I\'m loving you story so far! Please continue, it will be so intresting to see what will transpire in the present age.

Good chapter, good insight in Snape thoughts and insecurities, but have problem with this phrase...

her sweet wet pussy

I felt it could be than in a more polish way.

Love this fic, you knopw that.

Chapter Ten : Pawns hate Pity... I am still playing catch up, but when I saw your update I had to read it right away, had to know what happened!!! I am hoping that this entire situation will make the present day Severus realize just how much Hone one truly showed her caring for him during the mission!!! I also hope he will see that they have so much in common & that he will remeber that there was in fact a certain chocolate-eyed girl who had shown him that there was more to life than the negative he was accustomed to, even if only for a brief moment in time!!! I am very much looking forward to the next chapter as well as to her return to her time, to see just what will happen with Severus!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<

So, Severus knew she would try and steer him away from the life of a h ath ater and put a little spell on her...how convenient! Another blowjob to take that headache off her midn or will young Severus give her an orgasm to end all orgasms. And once Hermione has the potion, how soon will she return to the present and will Severus and Hermione look at each other with fresh eyes? Oh, the torture for poor Severus knowing Hermione would grow up to be such a vixen and he couldn;t even touch her, but had to recall his youth. Sweet torture.

Awwww!!!!! Such cute interaction between them! What wonderful verbal sparring.... I do wonder what is going to happen when Hermione has to eventually go back to the future and Sev\'s going to have these memories of her doing these intimate things with him (awkard or sexy? maybe both?). Since everything is somewhat influencing the future even now (I guess) he has these \"memories\" that would kinda weird me out thinking about having to face my her her when I returned if I were her....but then again, Snape\'s a sexy bitch past and present....sooooo.....hehehehe......Well, great chapter, can\'t wait for the next one...wicked cliffie you left us with...