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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent pair of chapters! I\'ve never read a time turner fic where Hermione met school-aged sev. I love this story tons. Can\'t wiat for more!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this...my only problem is....I don\'t think Moody was \"Mad-Eye Moody\" yet....he still had both eyes at that point in time....
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(\'bout time aff is back up...) This chapter was so bittersweet (I\'m not being sarcastic this time). I felt for poor Severus and what he must endure in the future. Poor Hermione shouldering the burdenn of knowledge and there is nothing to do about it. Can\'t wait to see how they interact once Hermione is back in her own time (hope it includes lots of lemons...or are you going to end on a downer?) Keep those chapters coming.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic. Considering I dont like any smut...but then again this is adult fanfiction ;)...I love the way it flows, and I like how defined Hermione and \'Young Severus\' is. and as someone had said before, its gotta be hard knowing that shes a lil tramp underneath all that hair. Insane...anyways, great fic. Update soon
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so ... (lacking of the right word)...tender, without being fluffy. I could \"felt\" her hugging him.
About my last review, well, I\'m non native. I felt the phrase felt odd, but can\'t get another one in replace (Quite usefful reviewer am I)
Now, you really get me waitting for the next chapter, is seems that a time paradox is in order. Eww
About my last review, well, I\'m non native. I felt the phrase felt odd, but can\'t get another one in replace (Quite usefful reviewer am I)
Now, you really get me waitting for the next chapter, is seems that a time paradox is in order. Eww
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another smashing update. I actually can\'t remember if I have reviewed this fic b 4 or not?
Never the less I am doing so now anyway lol
I think your doing a great job, I feel so sorry for our young Sev.
I am happy to say I think you have painted a realistic view of his character, with his physical and emotional suffering.
I really enjoy reading about his inter play with hermione and the inner struggle he goes through trying to decide which little box she fit\'s into.
I think it\'s sad he was unable to identify some of the emotions she was feeling for him and even more devastated
to learn that he wasn\'t sure if he wanted to recognize them.
But thats what makes our sev so lovable isn\'t it lol
The emotional cripple that everybody wants to see healed and of course our brilliant
Miss Granger in my opinion is the best suited for the job.
I can\'t wait for the next chappie, well i can but i don\'t really want to lol
xoxox
Never the less I am doing so now anyway lol
I think your doing a great job, I feel so sorry for our young Sev.
I am happy to say I think you have painted a realistic view of his character, with his physical and emotional suffering.
I really enjoy reading about his inter play with hermione and the inner struggle he goes through trying to decide which little box she fit\'s into.
I think it\'s sad he was unable to identify some of the emotions she was feeling for him and even more devastated
to learn that he wasn\'t sure if he wanted to recognize them.
But thats what makes our sev so lovable isn\'t it lol
The emotional cripple that everybody wants to see healed and of course our brilliant
Miss Granger in my opinion is the best suited for the job.
I can\'t wait for the next chappie, well i can but i don\'t really want to lol
xoxox
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn it anyway...I always promise myself I won\'t read any fan fiction until it\'s complete, just to save on sanity...and what do I do? I go and read your story...I had to, I\'d stumbled upon it a while ago and only had seen it updated to \'princess in a closet\' or something...and just lately, I saw that it had been updated quite a bit...so foolishly I think to myself, \"Well, it must be near over by now...I can read it.\"
FOOL!
Of course it isn\'t. Of couse you\'re just geg tog to the part of these stories that has me giggling like a madwoman, clapping my hands together... \'What will Snapey do when she returns?\' Hmmmmmmmm...the eternal question...*Raises eyebrow in questioning manner* So, because of this problem I -like every other Snape fangirl out there- must resort to squeeing and asking for a prompt update. Sorry, old habits die hard...cheers. holden.
FOOL!
Of course it isn\'t. Of couse you\'re just geg tog to the part of these stories that has me giggling like a madwoman, clapping my hands together... \'What will Snapey do when she returns?\' Hmmmmmmmm...the eternal question...*Raises eyebrow in questioning manner* So, because of this problem I -like every other Snape fangirl out there- must resort to squeeing and asking for a prompt update. Sorry, old habits die hard...cheers. holden.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I\'m quite pleased you upated so very quickly. This chapter had a very bittersweet feeling..and indeed left me wishing that Hermione could stay just a bit longer. I have to wonder what effect one decidedly brief, yet powerfull encounter will have on young Sev\'s future. Curious to see just how much of an impact she left. You know the drill, Update soon! and mail me when you do!
Anxiously waiting to see how much of an impact all this will have on
Anxiously waiting to see how much of an impact all this will have on
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahem. Please ignore the last bit of that, \"lost\" part of my review by adentdently hitting enter(aparantly more than once) And retyped that part. Sorry, i\'m a dork.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 -- WOW!!! She\'ll never be able to see adult Snape now in the same light! You ARE going to let them get together when she returns, right? Omigosh, can\'t wait for your next update!