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by Clarinet

person jewlzthejujubean
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WICKED creative! I can\'t wait to see how she gets younger Snape to trust her...and if the relationship built when he was younger will affect Future snape! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!! this is really interesting! keep up the good work
person Persia
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love this fic! It certainly is original, I don\'t think I\'ve read a fic where Hermione encounters a younger version of Snape. This should be INTERESTING....(lol). Hope you update soon! Can\'t wait for more!
person KarenDetroit
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly delightful first chapter...eager to see this develop!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... I am very much looking forward to Hermione\'s trip back in time!!! I am assuming that the Slytherin robes have a bit of a double meaning... 1. A Slytherin would be more accepting of another Slytherin (even a new face) & may not be as apt to use his very early Legilimency skills & 2. Maybe if she looks & feels the part it will be easier for her to follow through the points she\'s not so comfortable with, like the half lies.

I really can\'t wait to see how Hermione & the younger Severus respond to each other!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
P.S., When will Hermione find out what the sample of the potion is?
person hope
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me this \'simple task\' she\'s been sent to accomplish will not be so easy. Where would the story be if it were, right? Can\'t wait to see young Severus! :)
person XxphenixX
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh this is getting exciting. Hermione\'s little epiphany - that Severus rarely really looked at her - was very interesting, and I\'m wondering whether it has some significance? Maybe just looking too hard. What is this mystery potion? It has to be damn important.... The Slytherin attire was intriguing as well. The purpose? These people are ridiculously prejudiced against the houses, aren\'t they? Hermione is very emotional, isn\'t she? The inner workings of her mind in correlation (or perhaps without correlation) with what she says are very interesting... I hope she\'s a bit more capable of sensoring her thoughts around the other Snape... otherwise she\'s screwed... wait, did someone say screwed? Sorry -peraperate smut withdrawal, is it just me or have all the PWP\'s disappeared? Random, I know. Great chapter... can\'t wait to see what happens next. ::whispers:: no problem... do you have a beta?
person XxphenixX
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
P.S. xplaxplain the 10 Things I Hate About You thing - they had a sheep, not a goat. In case you didn\'t know, 10TIHAY is based on Shakespeare\'s Taming of the Shrew. Basically, one guy has a crush on this girl (Bianca), but cannot date her unless her shrewish older sister (Kat) dates, too. Therefore, he starts interviewing people to possibly date Kat. In response, one kid said something along the lines of, \"Maybe. If we were the last two people on earth. And there weren\'t any sheep. ::pause:: Are there sheep?\" Now that I think of it, I\'m not quite sure how they\'re really related... but it\'s funny anyway, right? Hope that explains it - and you should really see the movie!
person IrishRavenX
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"We Need a Goat\"?...well...I need an update!!!
person SareLiz
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely! I adore how Hermione just told him off in her mind, how it was the natural thing for her to do. Oh, please do update as soon as you may. This has the potential to be a wonderful story. I\'m already giddy. Yay!
person XxphenixX
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA that\'s funny. I really like that. The whole fifteen year olds and their sex obsession thing.... tis too true. The goat bit reminded me of 10 Things I Hate About You... are there sheep? I guess you had to see it to get that. I\'m starting to worry for poor Hermione... what is it Snape wants to tell her? GAH. You have me in suspense, my dear. And why did Harry and Ron practically force Hermione to drink vodka? And the bit with McGonagall, I believe you said \"Did she ever had sex?\" and I think you might have meant either \"Did she ever have sex?\" or \"Had she ever had sex?\" Just a little side thing that I noticed. Anyway, this is great, so update soon!