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for Thank you, Miss Granger

by Clarinet

person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story, so many possibilities.

I found you a great picture for your young Severus.

http://www.geocities.com/verutioalanrickman2/AR120.jpg

(And yes, that really is Alan Rickman in his, I would say early twenties.)

Toodles . . . . Glinda
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A quick P.S., I got a chance to go & look at your picture of young Severus... NICE!!! There is just something about those deep, dark, mysterious eyes!!!

Also to answer your question: You\'re always the first one to review. How do you do that?!

Just lucky at times;-) Truth is that I try to keep up with the stories that I like & check to see if they are updated a lot, too much if you ask my husband;-) Some days there are only a couple that get updated, other days I feel that all I do is read, but it keeps me out of trouble, that is as long as I keep up with hubby & the 4 kids, cooking, laundry, that type of stuff!!!

Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<

person scifichick774
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the background you\'re giving on Snape and Potter\'s gang. I always suspected that there was more of a backstory there and I\'m glad you\'re writing it. More soon please.
person XxphenixX
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well the WIP thing explains it. I don\'t beta-read exactly, but I have edited all written works of my four-year-older-than-me brother and all of my friends basically ever since I could read, therefore am astonishingly scrutinizing about these things. Thus, my dear, it is not your fault... blame it on the undiagnosed OCD. Poor Sniv - I mean Severus! That sounds so traumatic. I really can\'t wait to see what happens between our dear Hermione and poor Snapey-poo. Ha! I just had to say that. Sorry ;)
I\'d love to leave more specific notes about this chapter but I am in a bit of a hurry... just know that I love the story and am (im)patiently awaiting more!
person KarenDetroit
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH! Neat plot twist! Seems highly unlikely, though. JKR would have made some mention of that! Let\'s see where it takes you!
person spaz141
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting so far. thanks.
person Rosmerta
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I missed the first chapter of this story being put up - glad to get caught up now! Good beginning - a very interesting premise and you have e ane and Hermione both well in character. I look forward to reading more!
person Hermiones
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written, and a pure delight to read. I can\'t wait for the third chapter.
person trulymad
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this so far! I can\'t wait to read the interactions between Hermione and a 15 year-old Severus!
Hey, will the \"present-day\" Snape gain the new memories of his younger self? For instance, if yer Ser Snape were to say...KISS Hermione, would older Snape gain a memory of it? :P Just wondering! hehe!

Can\'t wait for next update!!!
person scifichick774
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. I simply can\'t wait until she goes back in the past. *rubs hands together evilly* More soon please.