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for Thank you, Miss Granger

by Clarinet

person Rosmerta
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter - so he finds The Girl in The Closet! You can see shades of Snape the spy already, since he doesn\'t yell out \"Hey everybody, look who I found!\" But oh, the poor mousie.... that was grisly. What happened to the poor thing? Did it just bleed to death on the floor? I\'m afraid I wouldn\'t have been able to kill it either - that poor Gryff has all my sympathy. Mean old Snape Senior!!
person Florentia
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There\'s a picture of Severus when he\'s younger?! ooooo DO PLEASE send it to me!!?? WOO-HOO!! My email is epond@sbcglobal.net
person Elizabeth Stump
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I like this story so far. There\'s something about young men with a dark streak (especially older men with a dark streak) that holds some sort of sexual facination for me. Oh, boy, will Hermione have to give Severus favors for his silence? Oh, to kiss a young Severus and blow his socks off. Keep those chapters coming faster, please. I don;t like to start stories that aren\'t finished, but your story caught my eye. I can\'t wait for the real fun to begin.
person IrishRavenX
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was interesting. The title of the chapter was hilarious, by the way. I wonder how far into Hermione\'s mind Severus read...

Thanks for the update, I can\'t wait for more!! (Well, I can...and I\'ll probably have to...but I won\'t be a happy camper.) :D
person scifichick774
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, see - now you\'ve gone and gotten me curious. Did he read her mind or just her emotions?
person Greenstuff
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story so far. Only the second time-turner fic I\'ve ever read, and completely original, proving that not every aspect of fandom is a repeat. YAY! I\'m so intrigued by the thought of Father Snape being the potions master, I mean why not right? It makes sense and provides some interesting things to think about. I\'m really looking forward to reading more.
person Persia
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooohooo!!!! You updated yay! Love the chapter, poor Sev, James and his crew were such a bunch of snots! Thank god Harry\'s not tly tly like his father, nobody could stand him. Hope \'Mione lightens up Sev\'s young life soon!
person hopelsydreaming
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry for not review sooner (on this chapter or the last). As usual I was impressed adn enjoyed the story. I can\'t wait until you update again
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3... Very interesting chain of events!!! So, Severus\' father is also his teacher & sounds like even he is cruel to Severus, no wonder the guy in the present is a mess!!! I do like the fact that Hermione has now seen even a small bit of how James & Sirius are towards Severus!!! I think that little eye opener will allow her to give the present day Severus a bit more thought & compassion than just hearing about what had happened in the past!!!

I am looking forward to her interaction with the young Severus & am hoping that she doesn\'t make the mistake of seeming to show pity for him!!! I think that Severus knew exactly what he was doing by leaving out information, it allowed her to go back with a less tainted frame of mind!!! It also shows that he has faith in her ability to adjust to a situation!!!

Can\'t wait for chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person influenza1918
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like you have an original take on the time-turner fic, here. I\'m enjoying it and looking forward to more.