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by Clarinet

person amy
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brill story i love snape/hermione time turner fics.............keep it up
person Persia
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing title for a chapter...Princess in the Closet eh? I imagine that\'s what she seemed to young Sev. I\'ve always thought Hermione\'s looks were underrated. She\'s a very pretty girl. Plus she was grinning at him, and god knows that Sev has probably never had anybody grin at him (well not without being sarcastic or evil about it). I wonder what he gleaned from her mind as well... Well guess we\'ll find out soon enough. Can\'t wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

BTW
I wonder how she\'ll explain being in the closet. I know that she was supposed to have been sent to get the potion but why would she be in the closet as opposed to the more conventional method of appearing after class? Of course, we know why she\'s in the closet but how will she explain that to young Sev without lying her ass off settsetting off the alarms in his head cause he\'s surveying her thoughts? Oh well you\'ll reveal it soon...
person spaz141
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it - if you are putting together a chapter update e-mail, please add me to the list. thanks.
person hopelsydreaming
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do we ever get to find out why his dad is so rude and abusive to Snape? When their eyes met and she felt as thought they were caressing her skin I got the impression that she was thinking of him in a sexual sense (that probably doesn
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! With a father like that, no wonder Snape is like he is! :) Snape\'s father is definitely a prick, but if he pushing them to rebellion and to prepare for war, well, he\'s on his way! Keep up the good work, and UPDATE SOON!
person ArienAstera
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh..its getting interesting now. Not that it wast before but \'the plot has thicd\' d\' as they say. Cant wait to read the rest.
person Talene
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a WONDERFUL tale! I will definately be keeping up with this one!! Great fan-freaking-tastic job!!!
person Greenstuff
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter! Though I expected nothign less. I love the idea of James being so similar to Harry with the Save-The-World complex. :) as for my name... There\'s no real hiddeaninaning, though my friends like to harass me about possible \'weed\' references.. Green\'s just my favorite color, so that became my online name :) although with the number of people who ask me I think I should invent a better story than that *winks* anyhow.. can\'t wait to read more, this story is so much fun to read.
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very, very good - I do hope you update very soon. BLessings, Kait (LoveThePotionboy)
person TESA
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! Love the fact that you\'ve included Snape Sr. in the story. Should make for a very interesting plot. I\'m sure you get this all the time, but I can\'t wait till the next chappie. lol.
TESA