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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It looks like you may have talent, but you\'re wasting it on writing things like this piece of garbage. \"Tara Lachlan\"?? Give me a break. Your wording is awkward, your ideas are recycled and boring, and what\'s more--you smell.
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Her sisters very calm andtroltrolled isn\'t she, great chapter, look forward to more... Jess.
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I was hoping you\'d do a Sirius POV. I was bursting at the seams wondering what he\'d be thinking about everything that has happened and it looks like he is going to use this whole situation to his advantage, and have fun with it as well. Given his proclivity to mischief, and his cleverness, how could he not? What a guy...:D.
I think you kept Sirius\' attitude towards women very real. Considering the time he was put in prison, and the fact that he was cut off from the outside world the entire time, he most certainly wouldn\'t have had much exposure to little things like women working, voting, wearing pants, etc... (Smell that? It\'s just a little sarcasm directed at our boy ;D). In this story, his views totally work. Not only that, his chauvinism and Tara\'s independence will almost certain get two sets of knickers in a twist, and fast (all together now...\"Sexual Tension\"). Hee heeeeee...:D.
Keep this up. You\'re doing a great job! And thanks for the smattering of smut.
Cheers!
Sher
I think you kept Sirius\' attitude towards women very real. Considering the time he was put in prison, and the fact that he was cut off from the outside world the entire time, he most certainly wouldn\'t have had much exposure to little things like women working, voting, wearing pants, etc... (Smell that? It\'s just a little sarcasm directed at our boy ;D). In this story, his views totally work. Not only that, his chauvinism and Tara\'s independence will almost certain get two sets of knickers in a twist, and fast (all together now...\"Sexual Tension\"). Hee heeeeee...:D.
Keep this up. You\'re doing a great job! And thanks for the smattering of smut.
Cheers!
Sher
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done, so now Sirius has the upper hand so to speak knowing exactly what his tracker is up to, nternteresting to see how cosy archie is going to get .......Jess
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! The Azrael Block was very interesting and I\'m even happier that Tara can\'t perform it. IMHO, by giving the talent to a supporting character, you provided even more proof that Miss Tara is more than the sum of a Mary Sue, in case anyone doubts. Congrats!
LOL...Archie! She named the dog Archie! I don\'t quite know why, but I think that name is hysterical for a dog (especially this dog)! :D.
Quote: \"It was really nice to have a friend that didn\'t evaluate her success percentages, bug her for sex, or try to set her up with his oldest son.\" Hmmm...bug her for sex (don\'t get out that vibrator just yet, dearie :D. Remember, the guy was in PRISON!). Personally, I wouldn\'t kick him out of bed and I suspect Tara won\'t either. Reginald better watch himself. He\'s a nice boy and all, but in matters of the heart, he seems to be dumber than a bag of hair :D.
End my two cents.
Cheers!
Sher
LOL...Archie! She named the dog Archie! I don\'t quite know why, but I think that name is hysterical for a dog (especially this dog)! :D.
Quote: \"It was really nice to have a friend that didn\'t evaluate her success percentages, bug her for sex, or try to set her up with his oldest son.\" Hmmm...bug her for sex (don\'t get out that vibrator just yet, dearie :D. Remember, the guy was in PRISON!). Personally, I wouldn\'t kick him out of bed and I suspect Tara won\'t either. Reginald better watch himself. He\'s a nice boy and all, but in matters of the heart, he seems to be dumber than a bag of hair :D.
End my two cents.
Cheers!
Sher
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, she has telepathy as well as prophetic powers. I see Isobel as a very reluctant medium of sorts, and a character that I\'d like to explore a little more. She kinda came about by accident, but I\'m looking forward to fleshing her out. I\'m glad you didn\'t mind my little trek into family life, but I felt like I needed to give some background on Lachlan so that it would be easier to comprehend some of the choices she makes in later chapters.
Anyway, that\'s my little clarification!
Anyway, that\'s my little clarification!
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done :D!
I really like the family background you\'ve provided. I couldn\'t help but wonder if Isobel\'s gift is somehow going to come into play in future chapters, because I found it interesting that she possesses an ability that could possibly allow her to see into people\'s thoughts (if I\'ve read this correctly). I can\'t wait to see where you take this (smut and all...hint, hint ;-D).
Was Sirius following Tara? Either way, I\'m sure that our favourite Animagus will somehow use this new situation to his advantage and I can\'t wait to see how ;-D.
Wonder how our doggie likes being bathed :D...
Cheers!
Sher
I really like the family background you\'ve provided. I couldn\'t help but wonder if Isobel\'s gift is somehow going to come into play in future chapters, because I found it interesting that she possesses an ability that could possibly allow her to see into people\'s thoughts (if I\'ve read this correctly). I can\'t wait to see where you take this (smut and all...hint, hint ;-D).
Was Sirius following Tara? Either way, I\'m sure that our favourite Animagus will somehow use this new situation to his advantage and I can\'t wait to see how ;-D.
Wonder how our doggie likes being bathed :D...
Cheers!
Sher
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well described again, Interesting that she will be giving our Sirius a bath without even realizing it, that\'s if he lets her!.....Jess
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Is it my imagination, or does Reginald\'s physical description match that of a certain blindingly sexy ex-convict? Not that I\'m complaining, mind you - just wondering. However, toor oor guy just escaped from prison, so I hope you\'re not expecting hi sha share (cough)...er, anything. Can\'t you tell that I\'m holding you to that future NC-17 rating? ;-D.
Not that I think you need it, but if you ever want visual inspiration for Sirius, go to: pages.prodigy.net/siriusblack. Click on \"Fanworks\", then \"Fanart\", then \"Syrena Done\". There, you will find what is possibly the best rendition of Sirius Black that I\'ve ever seen in my life (and I\'ve seen lots of good ones out there). Check it out if you haven\'t already. :D
Happy writing!
Cheers!
Sher
Not that I think you need it, but if you ever want visual inspiration for Sirius, go to: pages.prodigy.net/siriusblack. Click on \"Fanworks\", then \"Fanart\", then \"Syrena Done\". There, you will find what is possibly the best rendition of Sirius Black that I\'ve ever seen in my life (and I\'ve seen lots of good ones out there). Check it out if you haven\'t already. :D
Happy writing!
Cheers!
Sher
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops. I could have sworn that I remembered to fill in my name. Sorry!