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by ceruleanblue

person Jess
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah of course I\'m still reading it so Update you can\'t leave it hanging there, and where is Sirius?
person Sher
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes. I\'m still reading, although I\'ve been having problems getting on this site over the past few weeks, so I\'ve been getting to read more than one chapter at a time (the only upside :D). I guess the traffic has really increased, because I keep getting the message that there are \"too many connections\". I assume that I\'m not the only one who has had this problem.

Just so you know, I think you\'re still doing a wonderful job with this fic and I\'m looking forward to finding out what Lucius (my second favourite character) and Reginald have in store for Tara. Knowing these two, it won\'t be pretty, but it will make for great reading.

Poor Lupin is really caught between a rock and a hard place though, isn\'t he?

Cheers!
Sher
person Jess.
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh nice one, I do hope Harry finds out the truth, I hate hin thinking Sirius is a murderer, Looking forward to more.
person Sher
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy Mother\'s Day to me! Great update. I was looking forward to Snape ;D.

Gotta love those Slytherins. That was a very interesting meeting between Tara and Sev. In fact, I\'m willing to bet some of my major organs that Snape definitely got more out of that encounter than he\'s letting on. He obviously knows that something is up, but to me, his words to her seemed to be more in the nature of advice for her to exercise caution and keep her emotions under control rather than outright warnings or threats of what could happen if the Ministry caught wind of what she was up to (delivered in sarcastic Snape-style, of course).

Since this fic is AU (aren\'t they all now...), I can\'t wait to hear what Lupin has to say about all of this. Perhaps the words of an Auror will be enough to bring him around, or at least persuade him to keep his mouth shut.

Cheers!
Sher

person Jess
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s his dark snarky side I love , his sarcasim is such a turn on, but he doesn\'t hold a candle to my sex god Sirius *sighs contently* , nice chappy, Did severus see something in her eyes? and now onto our lovely werewolf.aww.
person Sher
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Hell!

What is it about Sirius Black?? Every word the man utters causes me to reel around like I\'ve been on a weeklong bender (and don\'t pretend you don\'t know which part of your story I\'m referring to either *wink*). That man has raised pillow talk to an art form and if I didn\'t know better, I\'d swear you\'d been rummaging around in my fantasies. Not that I\'m complaining, mind you :D. Good God, even man man\'s NAME is sexy.

Overall, this story is getting curiouser and curiouser...in a very good way. Now the lovely Tara is going to have the honour of meeting SNAPE, of all people. That should thrill our Animagus immensely...not :D. I still can\'t wait to see where you take this, and how you\'re going to redeem Sirius in the eyes of the wizarding world (hint, hint ;D).

Sorry, couldn\'t help that last part...I just love the guy to pieces and that will never change!

Cheers!
Sher
person CB
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Lol! Yes, I\'m quite the accomplished Legilimens and I\'ve been lifting fantasies from Sher Black\'s brain....


Seriously, I love writing the incorrigible Mr. Black. He\'s a character that Rowling barely touches on in the books, only as much as it suits Harry\'s story, and it leaves a lot to the imagination. I don\'t know about you, my my favorite \"Blackism\" to write would have to be the pillow talk in this chapter..it even beats his \"I\'m an Aquarius\" speech back in chapter ten! I can just see him sprawled out on that bed all sexy...similar to the picture you linked me to a few months ago. Heheh. You definitely have to email me sometime when I\'m out of the country so I can keep my brain on Mr. Black...



CB

person Jess
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh lets see how she handles our snarky potions master, and what will be Remus\'s reactions, .......Jess
person Sher
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! These two are complimenting each other so well in this story. I don\'t know though...Tara really needs to sort out those priorities of hers ;D. After all, she\'d just shagged a certifiably hot wizard who hadn\'t seen a woman in thirteen years and here she is worrying about finding clothes, and with him STILL IN HER BEDROOM. Perhaps the poor girl is just feeling lightheaded, yes? Call me a stickler for details, but the only concerns I\'d be having would be where and how to shag the guy next (hey, this IS Sirius we\'re talking about here...).

Still a great story. Keep it up!

Cheers!
Sher

PS - I agree with the others about JKR. If I owned Sirius, I would have played much nicer with him.
PPS - Have fun on your trip(s) :D!

person Cerulean Blue
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for all the reviews, guys! I was a little worried about posting chapter 12 since it was sorta deviant, but glad to know it was well-received. In other news, I did pass analytical chem: C+ baby! Yeah! And I\'m proud of this why? Cause I took the bloody exam with an ear infection, the flu, and a broken foot. Yes. A broken foot.

CB