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for Harry Potter and Gaining Momentum

by Ryanaven

person Liam Milne
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow,

I made it to the last update in less then four hours, I am proud of myself. Many kisses. Give me a shout.

~Liam
person Jenna
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I can\'t wait for an update. I really like the way you have portraid Harry and Draco. Jenna
person Chris
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say.. what I\'ve read so far has been amazing, its fabulous. Im certainly enjoying reading it and way to go for getting rid of Fudge that was great*chuckles*The plot so far, while interesting and odd, has been good and I can\'t wait until you update so I can continue reading. Again wonderful job!
person shelleykids
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it please have more soon lol it is very well writen
Shelley
person valkayrie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW ! I don\'t know where to start, too many things I adored...let\'s see, there\'s that new Petunia bonding thing, the wandless magic, the staves, the phoenixes, oh my god, love them, and that Dumbledore and Harry bonding too and the apprentices, the empathy, the showdown in chappie 18, the new Patronus charm, the whole bunch of them Marauders, yay ! And of course, little romance between Draco and Harry, though I have to say I wouldn\'t mind for a bit more ^^ hehe. anyways, good job and please update soon !
person Magdelena
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is WOW! And of course, I want more! This is absolutely fantastic. I\'m on the edge of my seat.

Maggie
person Keikokin
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody fantastic, what happens after chapter 18? Ack! And what about Harry and Draco? Ack! Please post the rest, email me when you do if you can. Love it. Keikokin
person Merrideth
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!! I want to know how the battle ended and the results.

update soon please
Merrideth
person Ash Knight
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Ryanaven,


Im glad my tip off about this site helped. i finished reading your fic and i must say i loved it. i cant wait for the next chapter and see what happens next. i deffinetly think its time for another slash chap with harry and draco. i loved the fight scene att eh end of chap 18 but i was a bit suprised that snape would help harry. well i hope to see the new chap soon, but since i know how busy life can get especially with college and all . . . i just hope things dont get to overwhelming. . .


sincerly,

Ash Knight
person Firit i
schedule February 13, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Well as you can see I'm too youn to be able to read the sequel at yahoo....so here I am waiting the new chapter...crying:(
Harry Potter and Gaining momentun was unbelievable.I just loved it.It had so much action...what I mean is that there was lots of elemets that you used very well even the veela thing. And Sevvie was just adorable;)
Clearly you have a huge imagination and you know how to use it to create something like this.
Hope you post the new chapter soon:)Love your story.