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for Harry Potter and Gaining Momentum

by Ryanaven

person Mouse
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is excellent. I love it, I think instead of writing a sixth book on her own, JKR should just pay you and take this!
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, there must be a burning in the next chapter, Harry seems to have used a lot of energy in this one. I was surprised with the whole thing about the baby. That\'s an explanation I\'ve never heard before! This story keeps getting better and better, and I can\'t wait to see where you take it next.

~Desertrain
person Cory
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you can not just leave the stroy there!!!! please please update soon..... I just told my friend earlier today, by your writing, you have the plotting and the ability to write that could compare to the Great JKR her self! his his is the absolute best fanfiction I have ever had the pleausre of reading and I was surprised at the very JKR like poltting of the story

congradulations
person shizukashin
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular. Absolutley positivley amazing. I love this story with all my heart! You are a wonderful author.
person Merrideth
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue!!! I want to see how they stand up againstpe tpe trying to get past the Occlumency wall. And if they manage to make a counter to the Killing curse. I also want to see if Harry and Draco get back together.

Merrideth
person \'Nix
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... You took some liberties with the characters, I\'ll admit, but a brilliantly written story. And you\'ve done your homework as well, when it comes to the occult. Most impressive.. Well-written and a pleasure to read. You also seem to have found a good balance between the romance and plot... and the angst and the plot. It\'s a difficult thing to do. I look forward to the next chapters.
person Lollipop
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE this story!!! You have to make more chapters!!!
They have to get back together!!! Or else you will die a sloooow death.... :P just kiddin\'
Anyhow I don\'t care if you\'re gay or bi...I think gay couples are hot... especially if it\'s Harry and Draco.. lol
I just love your imagination.. I wish I could come up with things like that...but sadly I can\'t
I hope more chapters are its way....:D
person bluehearts
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*raises hand* could you please make Harry happy again? *sniff**sniff* it\'s so depressing reading about the pain and watching (in my crazy mind) all the suffering he\'s going through... please???
oh!! and your gay? thats SOOO cool! i want to be gay... if i was a guy i would be gay... i think gay guys are TOTALLY hot! and they are so cool too!! my gay friends are wicked nice! they understand!! i love gay guys! too bad i\'m not a guy or i\'d definitly be gay... oh! i\'m not a lesbian though... although apparently some of my other friends think i am... oh well... i still think gay people rock! *thumbs up*
person mojo_jojo241
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor harry. poor draco. poor me. u have to finish this story or ill die!!! its like, the greatest story ever!
person Desertrain
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO! No! You can\'t end it there! Wow. I haven\'t read a story this great in so long, thank you so much for sharing it with us. it is definitely going on several favorites lists. Wow. I an in awe of your ability. Would that one day I could write as grandly as you do. I sincerely hope you update soon!

Wow. I don\'t know what else to say.

~Desertrain