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for Harry Potter and Gaining Momentum

by Ryanaven

person Anon
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it and hope you update soon
person Ptty
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent story. Been trying to c up up for a while, just really long. That\'s a good thing. Keep up the good work.
~palkitty
person Midnight Fairy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutely love your story and hope you update soon
please email me so i can continue reading it
keep writting
person lucifer geek
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK SO DOES THAT MEAN THAT YOU ARENT GOING TO UPDATE ON THIS SITE ANYMORE??????????????
person alex
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, this story is really really really good. it has the quality of JK herself, and sounds like it could verywell be in the 6th book. i think you did an excellent job of keeping the charactors in charactor. Relly great job. i hope that you update this story soon. it is one of my favorites
person Larva
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I can say nothing more nor less! You are a brilliant writer and I think I am falling in love with you ;) Great job!
person Kitty
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! A great series. It felt like I was reading the 6th book. Well of course Draco and Harry wouldn\'t be at it..but hey it could happen, in my wet dreams hehe ^.^. Oh, and too bad your gay. I mean I think thats hot and everything, but damn it! Its always the hot guys who are gay and that must mean you are totally hot. OH and reading one of the chapters where you explained some of the stuff, I think that you shouldn\'t have explained it, I think that people who are smart enough should have rzed zed what some stuff is and how someone can gnowlnowledge for different spells and artifacts. I mean a lot of the English language originates from Latin. So researching the Origin from J.K. Rowling\'s spells can show where they come from, and someone can actually make another spell and everything. So all I wanted to say was great job, keep up the good work and mail me when another chapter comes up. I\'m looking forward to it. And I can\'t believe I actually sounded intellegent for once...if I\'m wrong with nething, please dun burst my bubble. ^.^
person dedmun
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a great chapter! you\'re still an evil doer, though, as i haven\'t seen a \'the end\' anywhere yet. however, i live in anticipation of finally finishing your stupendous story. keep up the great work. can\'t wait for the next.
person CoryJ
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
here\'s my thought

you print this out and hand it to JKR and tell her to use it as the 6th book, you think it will work?

well other than the whole Draco Harry thing I don\'t think she would be to keen on that but it IS all part of a vaiulable plot I say go for it
person Cory
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* wooohooo this is great *does the cabbage patch* brilliant I tell you brillant!!! Daddy and daddy aww what a lucky baby *wonders what the name will be*

did I tell you how brilliant you are?