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There is no writing here

This story is really good, but it's riddled with so many coding and formatting errors that it makes it nearly impossible to get through. You should really go back and fix all of the format coding you have in there, or delete it entirely because I really want to finish the story...I just can't stand every other word being broken up by a line of coding. It's really difficult to have to just skip whole paragraphs because their full of coding errors.

hi, i've loved this story. i've been flicking through the back pages of the AFF site and tried to access the yahoo group to read the sequel. The group, as i'm sure you know, is no longer there and i am dying to find out what happens with everything. draco, harry, pansy and the egg situation, the elemental spells now harry can access rowena's chambers, voldemort, snapes (hopeful) recovery.
please email me if the story does indeed exist. tanyajones71@hotmail.com
many thanks for the plot and words.
tanya

Hiyas, Though I havent finished reading this story I thought I would add a bit of input (i've just finished reading chapter 8 and was getting ready to start 9 but I have work and need sleep soon LOL) anyway Im a bit confused on your story. I think its bloody brilliant so far but I get the feeling from the last chapter or so that some of your writing may be missing from the story. Where one chapter end then next chapter doesnt pick up and I get left with the feeling Im missing something important. I started reading a bit of chapter 9, at the end of chapter 8 you had hermoine getting ready to ask dumbles something and then the start of chapter 9 you have moine, harry and professor Mcgonall heading to the headmasters talking about someone using the imperious curse on someone.. that totally threw me for a loop and lost me, again I feel like vital info was left out, wether intentionally or unintentionally by you Im unclear of, but I thought I would mention it if it was a glitch or something LOL.. anyway I look forward to hopefully finish reading this story tomorrow if I can

Ja ne

ja ne

I have been reading your story and and even though the whole concept and the idea but it is somewhat confusing due to the fact that as soon as you get into something it jumps to something else. Like for instance they left the train on which something obviously happened to the next day with Harry being upset. Then there is the instance when the went into the chamber of secrets and was obviously cleaning then it suddenly jumps to them getting each other off and there are a few other intances as well but I won't dwell on them. I would love to finish reading your story but as of now it is a bit confusing. It is like reading a bunch of little short stories that have nothing to do with each other but at the same time are somehow connected.

cool

Heh, well first off, I must admit that I loved this fic. But I am concerned about the yahoo group thing, because every time I try the link, it says "Group Not Found There is no group called gaining_momentum_series. Please make sure you typed the web address correctly. If you have done so, the group may no longer exist." And I was just wondering if you had deleted it?

my dear, all of your chapters are screwed. THey\'re missing writing from them, heaps of it and making huge plot holes. Anyway, please fix them, i happen to like this story

I have to say, this is one of the most frustrating fanfic i\'ve ever read..It\'s out of ORDER...In grammar, and punctuations etc..Are you doing it on purpose or what??I\'m really seriously thinking that you are becuz most or some of your sentences/grammar makes no sense and there\'s very little to no Harry/Draco at all...The fanfic in itself is an alright read, which disappointed greatly due to the many GREAT reviews posted by readers...

Any one of the chapters is missing..

Overall, your fanfic is not THY worst ever read..

Hopefully you\'re not angry by my honest response to your fanfic...

Wow, I\'m so confused. Nothing happens in order or anything and there is no timeline or explanasions to speak of. One moment they\'re talking about Harry taking the wards, then the next chapter Ron attacked malfoy on the train and cursed him (don\'t remember reading that) then Harry wakes up in Poppy\'s...wth? Seriously, somethings majorly wrong here.