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for The First Summer and Summer Series

by Kronae

person ancientgirl
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well while I do realize that Severus is in love, and when some men are in love they tend to get a bit whipped, but I think you are giving Hermione too much leeway here. Don\'t get me wrong I really love this story, but the only one compromising and having to give things up is Severus. Hermione is still young and somewhat immature but I think there has to be a point where she needs to realize this is the man she wanted and went r anr and its not fair that she is changing him to suit her needs.
person SnapesAngel
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say hun, I like it :)
Keep up the good work !!!
person Aoibheann
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree with the reviewer who doesn\'t get why Snape puts up with her shit. To be honest, I think she has some brass balls expecting him to deal with HER friends constantly imposing on their relationship. She\'s with her friends all year long and she gets bent because he wants her alone for the summer? I would tell her to go with her friends if they\'re that important and to hell with their summer. She DOES realize that when you marry, your spouse comes before your friends, right? Dealing with HIS moods? Hardly, more like him dealing with her foibles. Still, it\'s nicely written even if the characters piss me off. LOL
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna smack this Ron up side the head ! Usually I love Ron, but this one . . . .

Maybe he needs to be getting a little. Might improve his mood.

Glinda
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I am really getting tired of your Hermione. I realize that she is young and all, but her little games are really trying my nerves. First she doesn\'t tell Severus about the party, hoping that he would enjoy himself (right!) and then she invites Ginny on their summer holiday and doesn\'t tell him till the next morning. He really needs to put a stop to that nonsense.

Just MHO. Still love your fic!
person tamargrl
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, sorta liking the story so far, but sometimes have trouble understanding why Snape seems to take everything that Hermione dishes out. She acts like a child and he seems to forgive all her sins far too easily. Not many men would stay in a bed with someone who has treated them so poorly and kicked them, as well. Even if he loves her, I\'d ine ine he\'d be more likely to leave than stay, but that\'s just my opinion.
person hermionefan
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhh, this is such a romantic story!! I just love it!
I wonder how he\'ll ask her....
please update soon
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading this almost daily and have not been reviewing. *Bad Me !!*

What a terrific tale !! It\'s sweet, sensitive, lusty and fun.

Keep the chapters coming.


Glinda
person hermionefan
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh, I just love your story!!
ist sooooo romantic, I wonder if her father will change his mind....
keep on the nice writing
person Haelenia
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WARNING:This is NOT a flame!!!!!!
One question: why didn\'t they used a silencing spell on the bed or on the room???
Again, thi onl only my humble opinion..
keep up this amazing work!!!