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for The First Summer and Summer Series

by Kronae

person Jessica
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need the next chapter! HAving two weddings is realyl interesting. I really love this sotry and i need the next chapter!!!! Hurry Faster! Love it!
Jess
person Nevillus
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only read through the 2nd chapter so far but now I remember reading this before. It was one of my favorites and i\'m glad you posted it here. i\'m going to go read the rest and leave a better review later. lol
person Raven
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh goddess this story was fantastic!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST HERMIONE/SEVERUS STORIES I HAVE EVER READ
person SnapesAngel
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whihieeeeeeeeeeeeeee
he finalllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyy asked her !
great chapter, and ow btw I love the severus in this story !
person Denali
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, Rilla, I don\'t see where anyone said for her to throw over her friends. As someone else stated, she has them all year long and sorry, I would dump someone\'s ass if they invited their friends on vacation with us without telling me. I don\'t see where it\'s so in canon for her to be a bratty littitchitch. I don\'t see where an in canon Hermione wouldn\'t have hexed Ron within an inch of his life and make him suffer for what he did to Severus. That\'s MY opinion. But hell, if it gets people talking and reviewing, it\'s all good, huh?
person Aoibheann
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. I guess I can\'t relate to a 20 something since I was born 35!
person Snapesangel
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what will happen next??
I m sooooooo loving this story hun :)
person Rilla
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story. I can\'t believe I\'ve never read it before. I\'m surprised that you\'re getting complaints about the way Hermione is behaving. To be honest, I think it\'s really refreshing to see a fic in which they\'re actually dealing with real relationship issues in regards to their age difference. As someone who married (the first time) while I was in college and far too emotionally young, I think it would be a HUGE mistake for her to throw all her friends aside for him. While I think she gave Ron a little more consideration than he deserved, canon Hermione is always defending peoshe she thinks are good at heart (like Snape) and I don\'t see anything different here. I know everyone wants Hermione and Severus to be hopelessly devoted to each other, but I think I would really worry about the mindset of a woman so young who throws away everything to be with a man. I don\'t think that\'s healthy at all. I think these are issues she would realistically face, *especially* since he\'s her first love. Well done.
person Denali
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gee, thanks for ywarnwarning. I won\'t bother reading anymore of this. If this manipulation and nonsense of Hermione\'s continues through the wedding, then there are dozens of fics that deal with actual character development in a much better manner. Just because it\'s a completed fic that\'s been posted before doesn\'t make the reviews any LESS valid.
person Ringbearer
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione\'s really not very considerate of Severus, is she? It seems like she\'s putting her \"friends\" as a higher priority than her lover. Why, exactly, did she even reconcile with Ron after his nasty little stunts to break them up? I rather feel like Severus at this point in the story- I\'m really getting sick of the Gryffindor gang tagging along all the time. Are they going to be going on the honeymoon as well?