rate_review Reviews

I am really enjoying both of these stories! You manage to make them sexy and erotic without dumbing it down like so many other authors! Thank you for having faith in the intelligence of your readers! ;o) Keep the plot bunnies coming!

Poor Lucius wasn

you should make this the next chapter in be careful, it really fits although you could change it some to explain what happened on the Draco/Snape end of the connection. both of your stories are great! with is the first story i\'ve ever actually taken the time to review and i\'ve read a lot of them.

Great Story! Post again soon please.

this was GREAT. I always knew Luciuis was a scardy cat on the inside. Please continue

Wow! Lucius was just about to sample the goods when Draco and Severus burst in on them. Tut, tut. What will Lucius plan next? I can\'t to see what he\'ll do to enjoy Hermione\'s charms. *wickedly grins* And I know that Draco and Severus will protect her twice as much. Please update soon! ;)

Hmmm....I almost wish that this was actually part of \"Careful\" because unless it\'s some sort of dream it seems pretty integral to the plot. It\'ll be interesting to see how the two are integreated. Can\'t wait to read more of either...great story, Zephyr!

Fantastic!!

They are gonna whoop his ass!!

Wait a minute what am I saying, I love Lucius!!

But still, I can\'t wait to see if they catch him!!

Dangerous, angry Draco and Severus, always a good thing in my eyes!!

Kisses
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Excellent. Obsessed Lucius is a really interesting character. Obsessed with a mudblood, and son\son\'s \'mate\' is even more intriguing. I\'m very interested in seeing what gimmick you create to let each of them know for certain just who the other is -- whether it\'s something as simple as personal passwords or a different type of charm. Everything you\'ve done so far has been inventive. I\'m curious as to just what force knocked Lucius away from her.... I\'m sure you\'ll reveal it when you\'re ready. And, Lucius, what will Lucius do? If he has been willing to gamble to such an extent, what will he do now that he\'s muffed the attempt?

man, great chap. i can\'t wait for more.