rate_review Reviews

Keep up! We are with you. Late update is million times better than no update at all; besdies, patience is virtue, so it doesn't hurt to exrecise it. Personally, I can give you all chances you need, and your story too.

This is truly a work of art. This last chapter (24).....wow! You captured the feelings of both Severus and Remus so well...I\'m actually at a loss as what I should write, the words are refusing to be written to express the somber feeling that is tingling through me. I am looking forward to the last installment of this fic, even though this was my first night reading it and am actually proud that I have managed to get through the entire thing in one night.

I hope that you do plan to do more work after completing this piece as I would love to read more of your work. As an author myself, I am envious of your talent and look forward to being envious in the future.

Anubis

aw :)

This uncommon story, dare I give it that too common name, is disturbingly and heartwrenchingly beautiful. This writing had me up past 4 am trying to stay awake and read more. This writing had me in tears. It made my heart hurt. I don\'t really know whether to love it or hate it, only that it astounded me and I wait wide-eyed for the final chapter. I commend your choice of quote, also, although I am familiar with neither the opera nor the movie from which you gleaned the words; from what I gather in the libretto, it was the perfect selection. The riddle itself, a lovely definition of that last of Pandora\'s demons and the opera an example of how the simplest action can cause the most far-reaching effect - from the Arizona Opera: Learn: Opera Synopsis, \"As they exchange stories, Timur describes Liu\'s care and affection and Calaf asks her why she has voluntarily shared such suffering. Liu answers, \'It is because one day, in the palace, you smiled at me.\'\" In the end, she kills herself to protect Calaf, as well, I\'m sure, you know. You are a brilliant writer, although as constructive criticism, there were more than a few spelling/grammatical errors and typos (likely caused more by the medium than the author). Overall, I can only thank and applaud you, and wait for your book to come out.

Only a moment more of your time, if you please - will the question of Lucius\' survival be answered in the final chapter? Please let it be so!

I\'m so glad to see that your fic is still being updated; I just finished catching up. Your brand of angst is wonderfully done; just looking forward to the H/C now. ;)

Haha, it looked odd, with Sev creeping nearer to Harry to share his wand with him. Only Sev, Harry, Wormtail, Voldy and Macnair was present in the room?

It really tore at my heart when Sev still felt so down, after the battle. But ah well, you quickly amended that with Remus waiting for him. I\'m also glad that at least Sev didn\'t forget about the poor Slytherin children! And darn that stupid Moody.

Oh, by the way, is this the last chapter? Or is there another? Great work!

I\'m so glad that Minerva spoke up for Sev. And Lucius! That was unexpected. It really touched me.

Your writing is quite good. Its detailed, and is able to portray what the characters are feeling exactly.

Ho, I was able to chance upon this fanfic while seeing someone\'s fanart. *cough I\'m such a perv cough*. Anyway, really great fic so far! It breaks my heart that Sev is still being tortured, and that Albus didn\'t really trust him in the beginning chapters. But I\'m really glad that Remus is there for him now, though I\'m sure its really painful since he can\'t touch Remus.

I shall have to stop at this chapter, and continue again next day. Its already 3.30 in the morning! Anyway, great fic!

Hi, I love this story and I have been reading it for ages...you might not want to know how long. Just to check, this isn\'t the end right? If it is, please tell me so I stop coming back and feeling kinda stupid. Thanks.