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for an unlikely match...

by h0lden

person spaz141
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is just sad, interesting, but sad. Do you explain why Hermione had her memory obliviated? Thanks.
person ancientgirl
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but I feel bad that Severus had to see Hermione and his brother in the sack, because I think his feelings of hate towards her are not hate but love. I\"m hoping they get things settled between themselves soon.
person mother
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Just a couple of questions. What happened between them and why was her memory altered and his not? Also is it just coincidence that she is marrying his littel brr? mr?
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing! Poor Severus, having to witness that nasty debaucle with Austere and Hermione. *ICK* Good work! I\'m looking forward to the next installment!
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very intriguing! Definitely looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!
person aleatha
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Please write more'm i'm intrigued with this new and fresh story idea.
person Rose Mikhailov
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has definite potential, especially if you get a beta reader to proof read your work. I\'ll be checking back though.
person Venomequeen_83
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly amazing! I do belive you have the beginnings of an extreamly entertaing fanfic here.
Keep up the excelent work!
person Lizzie
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this...i love anything with SS/HG in it...but i like them even more when one of them is stuck in a situation like Hermione\'s! MORE MORE MORE ASAP!
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! I like how Hermione\'s with the cheap copy of what she wants. :) Can\'t wait to see where it goes!