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thank G someone objected! Its the mother isn\'t it? I was almost having a heart-attack and damn their pride. thanks.

Wow Wow WOW! That was amazing. And thanks for that absolutly horrific cliff hanger. : ( Hurry up and update! I can\'t wait until everything is resolved- it will be bloody fabulous.

my, you enjoy drawing things out, don\'t you. You are driving me crazy!!
but otherwise, great story :)

I was dubious about reading this story because I thought it would be HG/OFC but with an eventual HG/SS pairing... how wrong I was and how glad I am to have begun to read it. I\'m utterly hooked now. I love this story... one of the best I\'ve read in a while. Please update again soon.

Poor hurting Hermione and Severus...hope they get it straightened out eventually. Hope that bastard Austere doesn\'t obliviate Hermione like Harry and Ginny. Then again, he\'s the poor man\'s Severus so he probably couldn\'t do it efficiently anyway since Sev said he probably couldn\'t even make her forget after seeing so much of their past. Oh well! Update soon and I\'ll find out. Love the fic!

I am aghast at the way nasty Austere seems to be getting his way. The absolute tosser!

This isn\'t a flame, just telling you how much I am getting swept into your brilliant story.

The confusion that Hermione experiences at the dance was almost too much to bear...
although I am sure you will make it all right in the end...
or will you?

Please update again soon before I get completely miserable! You\'re brilliant, holden.

Kait (LovesThePotionBoy) x

Oi, you\'re killing me here! Your story has had me on the edge of my seat since I started reading it. Who objected? Oh, please update soon. Your story would have to be my all time favorite HG/SS...oi bugger that it\'s my favorite Harry Potter fanfic. Just to be a slight nitpicker I noticed a few typos (nonesomuch that I couldnfigufigure out what you were trying to say) other than that your imagination, originality, writting style, updating is simply wonderful! Please put up the next chapter soon I about died when you left that cliffhanger! I WILL be back ^_~
Napea

God, I hope Ginny\'s wrong about that last statement. You write the tension well. Thanks.

I\'d hate for you to take this as a critisism, because I am really loving this story. But I have noticed there is some confusion. For instance Hermione is wearing her ball gown in Snape\'s room then next chapter she\'s wearing her wedding dress. Then she goes to the ball in her ball gown again and then is described as sitting in her wedding dress again. I not noticed in the last chapter you called Severus Austere at one point.

As I said at first - I love this story and I eagerly await each update and the minor problems (and they are extremely minor) do little to detract from it.

Please update soon and Pleaaaaase don\'t let her marry that shit. I hope the spy is old Ma Snape and that she kicks Austere\'s arse out of it for good and all.

Dancing In The Dark with Snape.What would I not give for that. *sighs wistfully *
I cant wait to see how you\'ll make Hermione change her mind now that Austere has Ginny\'s approval. Thanks for the quick updates.

Cheers !!
Sohara