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for an unlikely match...

by h0lden

person mele
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you for posting two chapters instead of making us wait! that was invigorating... though haven\'t been to too many weddings where the bride slapped the groom and the best man knocked out two teeth! aloha, mele
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m holding my breath. It\'s up to you - either I die of asphyxiation or you post the next chapter SOON!

THIS IS BRILLIANT!!!! Squeeeeeee!

Kait x
person Sohara
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRAAAAAAAAAAAAHH !!!
They are back together. At least I think they are. You dont seem the cruel type.
Anyway I feel great ; Overwhelmed, i daresay.
MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!

Cheers!!
Sohara
person LoveThePotionBoy
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is true then...what I\'ve heard. You *are* God. FanTAStic ending, loved it, huge \"aww\" factor, as well as being humorously and sensitively written.

thank you for letting me breathe!

bless you!

Kait x

person Snapeaholic
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! Another great chapter!
person spaz141
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20 intense. thanks.
person Aimee
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read every bit of this story today and I love it. It\'s maddening this isn\'t finished. Please update.
person crudedly
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaah, don\'t! just update, pleeeeaaaase!
person beautifuldreamer
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe you left it there that is sooo mean, lol i love this story i cant wait to see what happens next your a great writer
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I object !!
Guess who that is ?? The spy of course.
Bet it\'s Ron. He\'s been conspicious by his absence since the beginning.
I just have the hunch that he\'s the one doing all the secret listening. The wedding scene was very very well written. *claps loudly*
Holden you rock!!

Cheers!!
Sohara