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for Defying the Fates

by shelia

person midnight tiger
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm, this is definately and interesting story....are they trying to have the son (who seems to be sev\'s son but at the same time there are doubts) become him? or to help bring him back? cant wait for more of this one. really looks good!
person WendyNat
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, great chapter!! I like the little bits and pieces we\'re getting about the possible cause and possible cure... can\'t wait to find out more.
person elementaldeity
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, I\'m dying to know who is Alex\'s father, but I guess that is kinda the point in the story so you can\'t tell me.


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person spaz141
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a great writer. I\'m hooked, what happens next? Thanks.
person Evanescence
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so unbelivably ecstatic that you updated this wonderful -- and suspenseful -- story. I sincerely hope you intent to keep it on the surface and continue updating it so as to not keep us readers in too much of a frenzy, wanting to know what the outcome will be. You have a wonderful flair for dropping small but juicy details so as to keep a reader pressing on for more. Keep up the good work!

- Eva
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3... Things are starting to get even more interesting!!! I am assuming that Hermione & Alex are training to use the crystal to help Severus, but why can\'t or won\'t she tell Harry?!? Is this Dark Magic?!? I can\'t wait to find out more about this!!! Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<
person lindai
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Andrian, I\'m sorry iu thu think this story is a sleeper...I have been reading faithfully, but usually am unable to review due to work (which seems to be when it\'s updated :)). I have been enjoying the story, as I have your others, but I am confused. I\'m not sure if I missed something because I don\'t understand what has happened to Severus and what is going on with the children. I enjoy your writing, but in this case, I just at \"t \"getting it\". However, having said that, I will not give up on the story in the hope that in the future \"all will be revealed\" and my wishes for a happy ending will be granted. Linda
person TeaRoses
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting... seems to involve a new generation of Snapes.... or maybe not? I\'m intrigued and will be reading more.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 3, Chapter 2... I do feel bad for Hermione, having to do so much!!! I am glad that Harry will be helping her, she needs it!!! I do hope that she will be able to find a way to bring Severus back!!! She deserves that for all she has done out of her unconditional love for him!!!

It was interesting to get a little bit more insight into what happened to Severus, even if some of it did come from that nasty Flint!!! I am glad that Alex got the best of that little piece of work!!!

I LOVE the way you have created the personalities of Hermione & Severus\' sons!!! I look forward to learning more about each of them!!! Til chapter 3, Deb >^..^<
person hope
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss this story when until now? So much to look forward to and I can hardly wait.... Update soon, Please???????