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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!!! Alex isnt his??? but....grrr! you must update...i'm gonna die! :) thanks so much for posting this wonderful chapter!!!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Andrian,
This is such an incredible story... I don\'t know, what to tell you, but that it is amazing. I like it when you describe Hermione\'s and Severus\' sons. They are both very nicely developed characters. But I don\'t know how to judge that you let Harry get that close to Hermione. I wish he wouldn\'t show that much affection in this story, but the plot is yours anyways and I think you know what you do. I really hope Severus gets healthy again very soon... how long do you want the story to go on? chapters?
Sophie
This is such an incredible story... I don\'t know, what to tell you, but that it is amazing. I like it when you describe Hermione\'s and Severus\' sons. They are both very nicely developed characters. But I don\'t know how to judge that you let Harry get that close to Hermione. I wish he wouldn\'t show that much affection in this story, but the plot is yours anyways and I think you know what you do. I really hope Severus gets healthy again very soon... how long do you want the story to go on? chapters?
Sophie
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... Another GREAT chapter!!! I am glad that Harry was able to talk with Alex & told him about what happened to his father!!! I think that was just what he needed to be sure enough of himself to perform the spell on the crystal!!! I am very much looking forward to finding out if the spell worked!!! I am still curious about Adrien... why hasn\'t he been involved in the spell if he is in fact Severus\' son? I really am hoping that he is Severus\'!!! Looking forward to finding out!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^< 111 AAA
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
no no no no no!!! you cant cut off right there!!! Thank you for not having Alex\'s fears be true. and thanks for such a great chapter....so...what will happen now? he is ok isnt he? i cant wait! :) thanks for posting.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A true triumph .... as usual. Can\'t wait to see more.
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story, but if you cintinue with your evil habit of creating so many mysteries I will have to curse you.
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH NO! she had sex with Harry and killed Severus!!! (j/k) but you know she is going to blame herself for not being there, and blame harry too in a way. and the kids...oh please let him pull through!!
thanks so much for posting! i\'ve been missing this story.
thanks so much for posting! i\'ve been missing this story.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Part 5, Chapter 4... I have a feeling that Hermione is going to be served a healthy dose of guilt from her sons when she finds out what has happened to Severus!!!
What Remus said about Alex & what the sorting hat said gives more reason to believe that he is Harry\'s son!!! Add in that Hermione wasn\'t too hard to convince when it came to sleeping with Harry... seems like it may not be the 1st time?!?
I do hope that Severus will be okay!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
What Remus said about Alex & what the sorting hat said gives more reason to believe that he is Harry\'s son!!! Add in that Hermione wasn\'t too hard to convince when it came to sleeping with Harry... seems like it may not be the 1st time?!?
I do hope that Severus will be okay!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!! Damn you and your wonderful story and exciting cliff-hanger-ness!!! AGAHAHSHAHSH!!!! Now I want to know what happens!!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE NOW!!!!
~~ ** LadyTuesday ** ~~
PS - I went through all five chapters tonight ... I love it I love it I love it!!!
~~ ** LadyTuesday ** ~~
PS - I went through all five chapters tonight ... I love it I love it I love it!!!
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOhhhh! This fic is very interesting! I was extremely motivated to keep reading. Excellent characterization of everyone.