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for Ivory and Ebony

by PersonalInferno

schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was very good, and i hate to nitpick but i found one flaw in your story.
In actuality, black is the absence of all color, while white is the presence of all color.
:)
person faleeple
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!

ummmm... are the dragon and fox yu yu hakusho, kurama & hiei? probably not, i was just reading it and it\'s on my mind. meh
person Lily
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bounces up and down in her seat* i know who it is, i know it is!! Its Youko Kurama and Hiei from Yu Yu Hakusho!Am I right, I\'m I right. Sry, I\'m a little hyper right now! hehehe...
This was a very good. I love the way you used the words to create a whole new depth to their characters. It was very meaningful! I look forward to seeing more great things from you!

Much love and luck!

Lily, the Psyko Vampirate
person Saddo with too much time
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a friendly note to say that you got the colour thing the wrong way round. Black is the absense of colour and white is all the colours combined. Hence the reason you can refract light into a rainbow of all the colours if you shine it through a prism. Anyway, good luck with getting your computer working.
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