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Is there any kind of followable plot to this at all.

other then the annoying nudity thing and hermione adopting caitlan extremely quick.this story is amazing.

hey just trying to refind this story afters its deletion off ff.net. Im gonna read again so stay tuned 4 some revierws

i loved this book and i hope they don\'t stop makeing these books

Excellent. I have just finished the second chapter and am already intrigued. I will read those others that have background info, but as for this one, so far I am really enjoying it.

Pretty good chapter, just one question, how did Ron wind up with 3 sisters?

Nice premise and writing style, but one repeated mistake that is drivme cme crazy. During the discussion of H/Hr R/Hr school relationships, the clauses should read \"she and Ron had,\" \"she and Harry were,\" \"Harry and she had,\" etc. It is a common mistake to use \"her\" instead of \"she\" when the proper noun comes before the pronoun - like \"the relationship that Ron and HER had,\" but it really should be \"the relationship that Ron and SHE had\" or \"relationship that she and Ron had.\" You can check whether you need \"she\" or \"her\" by stating the clause with just the pronoun - she had, she was, etc. Hope this little \"beta-" he" helps. I noticed about five of these before I scrolled down to make this note. Good luck.

One of the best stories so far cant wait for the sequel

I absolutely love your story. In answer to your questions yes, I think that Sam is perfect for Ron but Draco should definetly start some trouble. Maybe run into Sam again and piss Ron off. I think it would be interesting for Ginny to be with Severus because I\'ve never seen that pairing before and the way you wrote this story makes me think that Draco will only leave Ginny again. My favorite out of the three girls is probably Jamie and yes I think her and Alex are perfect. However, I don\'t think that Toni and Amanda are perfect because it is obvious that Toni doesn\'t respect her. The whole nudist thing is a little hard to grasp but it is still interesting to read. I think tharryarry and Hermione should be a little firmer about letting them go here and there and in front of boys naked. Keep up the awsome story....

What an epic. I really do not usually like the \"next generation\" Hogwarts stories but this one wormed it\'s way into my heart. I look forward to the sequel. I really like the nudist storyline and the examination of sexuality. More on the Snape/Ginny?Draco triangle and the issues surounding Sam, Timmy & Ron.
This was really an inventive and original story. Congrats!