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Absolutely incredible, and strangely baffling at the same time...Draco and the gift of Gryffindor, now there\'s one I didn\'t see coming. And I LOVE the whole thing with Harry thinking Hermione\'s marrying Draco, it\'s so classic! His comment does show a lot about his feelings though...incredible writing...can\'t wait to read more.

Holy Crap! I cant believe she picked Slytherin! That was so unexpected. And poor Harry, so noble, not even realizing what he is walking i. I . I hope Hermione can get Harry out of her system and be with Draco, they belong together more than Harry and Hermione.

elementaldeity

o god the last line of this chapter was so funny
its priceless cant wait to hear what the professers face looks like an her reaction

I found this little gem while reading your portkey story \"but I thought YOU loved her\" (which I like very much). I love this storyt ist isy wey well written, great descriptions, and has me waiting for the next installment. I am very nervous about all the Hermoine/Draco foreplay, as I am very much an H/Hr shipper (hence portkey). But what a scenario you present! Harry\'s in denial, Draco\'s a gentleman and Hermoine is emotionally (and morally?) rudderless. Very juicy! Hermoine promising sex to Draco if he delivers Harry - big mistake! Huge!

I realize this is your story and therefore my opinion has little sway, but I am praying you will have Hermoine end up with Hermoine. From your A/N in portkey it sounds like you still haven\'t made up your mind. D/Hr is just wrong!!

Please update soon. I check twice a day. Thanks for a great story.

Oops - big mistake on my review. I meant to say I pray Hermoine ends up with Harry, not with herself.

This has certainly taken an interesting turn in the last chapter. I\'d really like to see her take the Ravenclaw or Gryffindor gift, as I think she would in character, but this also is intriguing. Please don\'t mess up all her friendships in her quest with Draco though. I\'d like to see her retain her friendships with Ron, Harry and Ginny at the end of this......

i can\'t wait to see what gifts they choose.maybe hermione will realize her and draco belong together,and not even bother with harry.

I\'ve just read all the recent postings. This is a fascinating and revealing story you\'re writing. I particularly like the sexual politics you\'re playing with the group. In my long and varied career, I\'ve seen some of the \'big boys\' play, Draco\'s tactics are not so far from the beagueague. He\'s almost disarming in his intelligence, and in his respect for her. He\'s playing to win, and it\'s a calculated risk. But, by playing to her intelligence, I think he actually has the upper hand. Your Harry is interesting as well, and using his intelligence in a way we don\'t get to see terribly often in canon. Where you plan to take it will be very fascinating..

OH MY GODDESS!!! Wow, I am SO addicted, but, because I am evil I feel I must somehow flame...I think maybe you have trouble when entering the story because the mistakes I find are more in the way of mistakes made when typing up a copy while distracted, I hereby humbly beg to beta for an incredible story teller, puhleese????? ok, done being pathetic, so, when\'s the next chappie?
Love, Hugs, Kisses and Blessings,
the decidedly deranged,
Anna

YUM YUM!!
Please sir, may I have some more??