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Very clever chapter. I like how you\'re developing your characters, and it will be very intriguing to see where to take them.

Great chapter (17)! I was pleased with how the ceremony came out, especially Draco\'s choice; it showed he has a long-term vision and is not just a hound in need of constant gratification. I also liked the \"additional\" magic that goes with each gift. It made Hermione\'s choice easier to take. It was clear from the vision that she already had Courage, Knowledge, and Suc in in abundance, so what she really needed was Charisma. It was not such a short-term or self-serving choice after all. Well done with that.

I would like to point out, and I\'ve seen this in a few other fics as well, the term is \"disapparate,\" not \"apparate away.\" When one arrives, he apparates; when he leaves, he disapparates. Otherwise I noticed no glaring errors, so being more careful certainly helped. You\'ll find having your hubby (or any friend) reading your work not not only help with the proofreading, but it may be a good source of ideas and inspiration, having someone else give you feedback on the story before you post it.

Keep it up. I can\'t wait to find out what happens next!

OMG! Harry is *so* sweet in this one! : )~ That was great what aid aid to McGonagall.

I must admit, I\'m *dying* to know why Draco chose as he did. And the shock of McG. and Snape at Hermione\'s choice was absolutely priceless. ::smirk::


I\'m on the edge of my seat for the next chapter
Kiri

I must admit to being a bit disappointed in her choice, although I can see how it would move the story along. Nice touch with Draco-and was that a bit of foreshadowing in the founders speech? Hm...looking forward to see what you do next-nice touch bringing in the Russian and Chinese influences.

OMG! I love what harry said! *giggles* he thinks malfoy got hermoine pregnant??? *giggles again* Nice with the gifts... tnx for posting the chappie!

This is great You\'ve had a really original idea for a fic. Well one I haven\'t seen before . Well done and I\'ll be staying with this to see how it develops.

Wow, that was a BIG assumption on Harry\'s part. Is he actually going to be relieved to find why he has been summoned? Thanks for the chuckle at the of of your chapter.

Ohhhh. what is that Draco up to? That was an unexpected move. Very interest and thanks.

harry thinks she\'s pregnant. that\'s hilarious. always the hero eh. you are so detailed in your story. little things like the frog closures on the robe really bring the story to life. it\'s very interesting to see the confliction in hermione. on one hand she wants harry. on the other, draco. i really wonder who she will end up with. draco\'s selection was interesting. it can\'t be just a throw away selection for him. i wonder what\'s up. still some errors in the story. i know you know that but it\'s distracting to read a line where it has \'hs\' s\' or \'the additional the\'. i hope you understand what i mean. either way very interesting and i look forward to more.

Well, that was a surprising ceremony! Love Harry\'s comments at the end to McGonagall. They certainly showed an interesting predisposition toward Hermione, but I wonder what he is going to think when he finds out what is really going on....... Thanks for the quick update. I hope the next one is also quick!