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another excellent chapter. you certainly have a way with words. i especially liked the line \"I\'m 17. I get an erection when the wind blows.\" hilarious. the servitude spell seems an awful lot like imperious, but i guess that\'s to be expected when it\'s a gift from salazaar slytherin. i\'m glad you didn\'t really use it for their first time. but even though you didn\'t use it, it seemed it wasn\'t such a good time in bed for harry or hermione. sure there was a bit of gratification but h see seemed rather upset and used even while trying to perform. i was kind of expecting a slower build to the sex and not just a quick (and unfilling) jump in the bed right off the bat. hopefully there will be more seduction or growing feelings between hermione and harry as time goes on.

I wonder what Harry\'s going to do about Ginny now? I really didn\'t expect that so soon, at least it was a more realistic first time. I\'m not really confused maybe just bewildered, I await more.

btw that was an interesting way to respond to reviews - I\'ve never seen that before. thanks.

Mmmm...

Really like the way you see Luna. Stands to reason that she will be good at picking up deatails!

such a great story!
thank you for sharing it with us!

Wonderful story. I have some speculations now and say that Hermione\'s choice might actually be what gives her side victory. The Slytherin gift has not been chosen since the single gift policy was initiated, so Hermione is the only one walking around with the charisma enhancement other than Voldemort, and since Voldemort has the Hufflepuff Gift \"To know one

Hruumph, posted my review twice.

Every so often, I stumble upon a story whose author knows how to write in English, keep everyone (fairly) in character and everything within the realm of possibility, and create actual PLOT! So, I thank you. :)

wow! that story is really quite something. i loved harry\'s reaction at the end of the 17th chapter: what a cool cliffhanger! personally, i\'ve always thought ron might turn out to be something of a ninny, so i\'m glad somebody agrees with me. the idea of the four g of of the founders is quite clever and i really enjoyed reading about hermione\'s struggle to choose. i can\'t imagine what i\'d do with such a choice, but i can understand hermione\'s. now comes the real challenge: will she continue to want harry or will she realize that draco truly is the shiznit? i can\'t wait to read more of this.

what is draco really up to?
how could harry and hermione do this to ron and ginny?

WOW! I must say, my dear, I am surprised. I wouldn\'t have thought Hermione had the... I don\'t really know what it is but I didn\'t actually think she would. Not that it was OOC. It was fantastically written and all that jazz but WOW. I really didn\'t... WOW. I did think Draco was going to choose Gryffindor but hold on a second, I\'m still WOWing. WOW.