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i have been bad about reviewing lately! But I am enjoying this story.. i love the Triangle developing between Harry Hermione and Draco.. !

You\'ve really created an interesting set of ethics for Draco, which he\'s adhering to. It\'s a very appealing trait, integrity. And, he\'s being a gentleman about giving her time to explore her feelings for Harry, which ultimatare are unlikely to be as satisfying as the ntasntasy\'. Hermione will be an interesting force to contend with as the gift of Slytherin sinks in, all that charisma, melding with a woman of intelligence, courage, and loyalty. This characterization of Harry is fascinating; he\'s not really quite a hero is he? You can see the uncertain young the the friend, the confused lover, and the strong man he may become, rolled all in one. He\'s not altogether likeable. Ginny and Ron, while not really peripheral, aren\'t really pivotal thus far. I can see the dynamics of the group shifting and melding and being tempered over the course of time, and when interwoven with the external politics of the wizarding world, this is an extremely layered story you\'re telling. I\'m looking forward to your next intriguing chapter.

Great, I can\'t wait till you update! One thing i don\'t get though, why is harry so emotionless? it\'s like he doesn\'t feel. You don\'t describe ch. 18 as good as the encounters with draco. anyways keep it up.

Wow! Lovely chapter! I take back anything derogatory I may have said about Hermoine. I really loved her in this chapter. Even though she has all the power she seems so vulnerable and so completely in love with Harry. I almost have hope that she and Draco are a thing of the past. Harry still seems a bit of a prat, but he is, after all, just a 17 year old boy. Great line by the way - \"I\'m 17. I get an erection when the wind blows\". Their first lovemaking was very sweet. Harry\'s staying power isn\'t exactly \"draconian\" but at least he gave her pleasure before he lost it. Hermoine seemed to be more interested in the intimacy than the sex anyway. This is a really great story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

lol... that was too funny... \"they never got their Hermoine sandwich\" just cracked me up... glad to see you updated! *Grins*

Wonderful fic! I was just sad that there was no more to read tonight. Please update soon. I would love to see a DM/HG ending though. What can I say, I\'m a sucker for the forbidden pair!

No time for a longer review, but geat chapter! Am very interested in the attempts at a Hermione sandwich... t you you could have a ficlet of Fred and George trying to bed Hermione... maybe even succeeding? Am I asking for too much? Maybe. But it\'d be nice. Actually, it wouldn\'t. It would be very naughty. ;). Once again, great chapter, glad to see things moving along... blahblahblah UPDATE

too bad draco was headboy,if i were hermione,i would have choosen him for the slythirin gift.

this is a fantastic story. I wouldn\'t worry about it being long and adult with no sex. A lot of people stick to adult fanfic sites because the stories are written by adults, and therefore hopefully of a higher quality anyway.

looking forward to the \"interesting\" bits

Wow! What a great Line - absolutely priceless! Our heroic if somewhat clueless Harry jumping to conclusions and offering to save the day! And what\'s this - a somewhat dark Hermoine choosing the slytherin gift? I love your story, but I think you are definitely going for Draco in this story - I feel you are making him much mappeappealing than Harry. Suave, sexual, physically adonis-like, rich, intellectual, caring, powerful (never used his powers because they were too destructive and he was capable of such self restraint? Even when he was turned into ferret/slug/etc.?). He seems a lot more flushed out than Harry, who comes across a little wishy washy (except for the unfortunate physical abuse incident) and one dimensional. I hope I\'m reading too much into this and your H/Hr bias will win out, but I\'m losing hope with each chapter. At any rate, your story telling is awesome, compelling, and leaves me begging for more! Thanks!