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Wow - two chaps in one week! Thanks! Ooh Ginny is so busted! Very humorous, the whole Ginny/Ron/Quidditch thing. I\'m crazy about your Hermione - she seems totally in love with Harry. He seems to be coming around, too. Still a little childish, and not as passionate as I would like, but at least the romantic feelings are scingcing. Sorry, I am sure many of your readers are liking Draco, and I must admit you are handling his transition from bad guy to good guy very well, but he is NOT right for Hermione. He is well intentioned, but he still calculates every move he makes. Thought it was great that he feels he may have understimated Harry. I love your story. Please keep it coming.

Good writing. I\'d like to see Ginny and Draco get back together in a serious relationship unless Hermione changes her mind with Harry and goes with Draco. I usually don\'t like D/Hr pairings, but with Draco being this \"sincere\" in his feelings for Hermione, then I like it too.

I find myself very much hooked on your story telling. The plot is intriguing, and I\'m enjoying Draco\'s Slytherin plotting. I\'m a die-hard DMHG shipper and am wondering how you\'d draw it such that Draco has a chance with Hermione, who\'s obviously delirious with Harry.

I think Harry underestimates Draco a great deal - and even with the less tangibly seen gift of Gryffindor, Draco is assumed to not have what it takes to best Harry, who\'s been one step ahead of Draco always. It\'ll be interesting to watch the next Slytherin-Gryffindor match to see how Gryffindor\'s gift can hearten Draco to snatch that Snitch before Harry. Also, I think that your rendering Draco to desire courage to win Hermione is an excellent stroke of inspiration. Indeed, he would need to be courageous to swim against the current to woo her.

I\'m excited to see how you further develops your story.

What Campy said.

I have been reading this story from the beginning but didn\'t have the words to express how I felt. This is a good story, I enjoy reading it.

This is a fascinating story. the premise is really unique and I really like how you have been developing Harry, Hermione & Draco. I look forward to reading more and seeing hoe the relationships develop.

My favorite part so far has to have been the ceremony and the reactions of McGonagall & Snape to Draco & Hermios chs choices. Absolutely classic!

i know harry and hermione have some issues to work over but where is the \'unhealthy\' bits you keep mentioning? i\'m a bit slow and need things ted ted out to me. i really like this story. i especially liked the fact that your little servitude spell was compared to imperious. i guess i guessed correctly. the quidditch practice was great. it was funny to hear ron yell at the other players. and then harry flying around bit was also refreshing. harry having fun is um fun. hehe. i do have to say that some of yoialoialogue seemed to ramble on. many of what harry or hermione said while talking was a bit confusing. i had to read over the line several times before it became clear. the worst of it was \"I can

Another good chapter, Keep it up! Will Draco spill the beans tnny,nny, as far as how Harry and Hermione went? I can\'t wait for more. Besides who will end up with who?

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Wow, this is a wonderful story. Full of conflicting emotions, this is wonderful. At this point I am rooting for Draco to come out the victor, since, well Draco is one of my absolutly favorite characters. So keep up the good work, and I\'ll keep reading.

If you are trying to make your readers torn between Draco and Harry for Hermione\'s affections - its working for me. I\'ve mentioned before that I don\'t like Hr/D pairings, but your Draco seems to be IC and sincere. I am H/Hr primariloughough and if they work out yippy! I am enjoying reading, thanks.

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