rate_review Reviews

That story\'s really cool girl pleazze continue as quik as possible
xxxes Luciana

omg i love ur story soooooo much.. n u havent updated for a while.. sigh.. pls update soon!!.. i was just doin sum yard work n den i remembered the whole hermione askin to have harry as a \"slave\" haha.. pls keep writing.. i love the story!!

o btw im soooooooo sorri i havent been reviewing.. its cuz i dont get to have much time online so i usually copy paste read n review later.. GREAT STORY great plot.. conflict.. hidden agendas.. hehe so beautiful ur a great writer.. pls plsplspslspls update soon!!

UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is not fair, you cant leave me hanging like this! i want to know what happens next! please write more. dont give in to writer\'s block, dont let it win. fight it! please update soon, i dont know how much more i can stand. or how much more i can beg.

UPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP AND SPRINKLES AND CHOCOLATE SAUCE AND ANYTHING ELSE YOU LIKE! PLEEEEEEASE! i love this story, i want to see where it goes. you cant just leave us all hanging like that, that is not fair! please update SOON!

update! update update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please, pretty pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

oooooooh ho ho! wow, this is good, what a way to end it! maaaaajor cliff hangar! i still wanna know what happened in that carriage with harry and hermione, but i guess i can put two and two together pretty well. man, this is hott hott hott! really good story line too, the whole gift thing was a very good, original idea. i would have never thought of that in a million years. props on that. well, i cant wait to see what happens next. ron seems to be in a towering rage. hes not a red head for nothing! (fellow red-head here)well, cant wait!

hey, this is really, really good so far. but i think you forgot a chapter. the whole thing with hermione telling harry and her slapping him, and the ride in the carriages, i dont remember reading that. i might be wrong, but i really dont remember reading that. well, oh well, i get the general idea anyways. ok, im going to keep reading now

I\'m sad. You haven\'t updated since forever.

Overall glorious fic. It\'s one of the first Draco/Hermione I\'ve ever read and I just want you to come back to earth sometime soon and put up a new chapter.

You will come back, won\'t you?

Interesting story. Shame FF.Net stopped carrying NC-17 beause this is a real story rather than the sex acts with a poor story wrapped around them. I am glad you have a resident critic and proof reader. Ihave been married long enough to where my children or at least one are older than you. Good lick on furthur writing and invent your own reality that would be marketable without copyright infringement. I am halfway through a story that has Harry immortal and I am trying to decide if Ginny should join him. I wish Hermione could but she wouldn\'t fit the possible character needed. If JKR had left Blaise Zambini a female the that might have been an option. Perhaps one of the Hufflepuffs might make it but that would take a lot of character developement although Susan might be an alternative. Must think some more. Pardon I get carried away thinking on the keyboard. The parade is on NBC at the moment if you are in the Canada/USA you probably have this on. Oh well it\'s better than the usual drivel.
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