rate_review Reviews

this is a great story so far. it\'s well written, except for the occasional spelling error. those are easily fixed. there are a few grammatical errors though that are a bit more difficult to pick out but would be worth a good read through and follow up. other than that, the plot line is nice and the characterization of hermione and draco is interesting. hermione seems right on. the only thing about dras ths that he\'s a bit more mellow. of course i don\'t know what happened to him during sixth year so it could be on too. i\'ll let it slide. i\'m a nice guy after all. hehe. i\'m very interested about who they will pick as slaves. it seems kind of unbelievable that a practice like that would be allowed. dumbledore especially doesn\'t strike me as a guy who would allow that kind of degradation and humiliation be put on a student, if said student has no choice in the matter. i\'m willing to suspend my disbelief for the moment though and am eager to see who they choose.

KEEP WRITING I\"M ADDICTED!!

This just keeps getting better and better. The plot advancement is going wonderfully, especially amusing with the frustrated Draco and the unfazed, straightforward Hermione. I\'m looking forward to seeing what happens when they see the other students... you\'re really keeping us hanging with the slave things, aren\'t you? I don\'t mean to rush you but get to it already! I want to know!

that was really good,i like the slave part.i would have selected draco,if he wasn\'t headboy.

WOW great book PLZ keep writing cuase you\'ve got me addicted!

I really love this story line. I can\'t wait for more. is this going to be hermione and draco or hermione with everyone? I think she should want harry as her sex slave and draco as to boy toy.

waiting for updates,
merrideth

Neat!! please update soon!

This looks very promecing, a new idea i have never seen befor, i hope you keep it up! and soon

Interesting story; great concept, too. I can\'t wait to see what happens with the gifts Hermione receives, not to mention what\'s going on with her and Draco... and Harry... I really hope you update this again. Don\'t be discouraged by scarcity of reviews, just keep writing and people will notice. You\'ve already got me hooked ;).