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I like your starting points for Hermione and Draco... interesting parallel characterizations, and, if you plan on bridging the gulf that separates them, you have a lovely long way to go. I like that Hermione is fairly innocent, physically. It makes sense that her character would be unbalanced -- so mature in terms of her literal education, and with her experiences with the Dark Lord, she\'d be very immature in a socially physical sense. I\'m delighted to have found your WIP, and am looking forward to reading more.

Oh What! Amazing story (esp keeping the Characters in Character!!!!!!) Gimme some more!

vnicenice beginning. I like where this is going and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter... who will Hermoine pick? And Draco? It\'s funny watching him be flabergasted (which is one of the coolest words on the planet if you ask me... there\'s a few others but those are related to my work, like a dongle)! *grins* please continue! It\'s a wonderful story

I am really enjoying this story. I like the idea of the \"Gifts of the Founders\" and it is really well written. I was wondering if you could e-mail me as I have a few questions I would like to ask. Please continue soon. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter.

how the heck did you get three chapters out at once? grrr. i can\'t do it. lol. but whooooo boy, they were good. i can understand why harry would not want to have sex with ginny on one level. he is afraid he might die and then leave her alone. but on the other level, if he was afraid he would die, wouldn\'t he want to have sex? that will be interesting to work out. maybe they just won\'t be able to work it out. another relationship that seems troubled is hermione and ron. they just don\'t seem compatible. i have my favourite pairing but i\'m doubtful it will come about. i\'ll keep my fingers crossed though. there are so many things to point out but i don\'t want to be too long winded here. see what happens when you get three chapters out at once. sheesh. let me just say it was very cool how aware luna was about hermione\'s lack of response. i\'m not sure how in character that is though since she is portrayed in the ootp as a bit flighty. anyway, this is long. can\'t wait to read more. even if it\'s another three chapters at once.

Wow, these last three chapters, very interesting. Harry and what he\'s going through with Ginny and life really and talking to Molly the whole thing brilliantly written. Hermione\'s reaction to kissing Ron ewww, she\'s realized that they are together out of circumstance than really wanting to be with him. I really don\'t like Hermione/Draco nor Harry/Ginny pairings, but this story is intriguing me enough to but my bias aside and enjoy a well written story. Thanks.

Oh, this was absolutely YUM! I love the setup, Draco\'s character, and Hermione\'s. I also really like the way you differentiated between inexperience and \'innocence\'. There is such a huge difference between the two, anlovelove how you played it out with Hermione.

Kiri

OOh this fics a goody!!! I can\'t wait for the next update! =)

Wow... This is a great story. I\'m surprised with the Harry/Ginny relationship but hey, Ginny needs someone. My fave coupling is D/Hr and then Hr/H... I don\'t like Draco with anyone else and i\'m not a huge fan of ginny\'s... but that\'s just my opinion. I love the story! Update soon!

I really liked this chapter. I loved what you wrote in respect to Harry and Ginny. I just hope you don