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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I normally don\'t enjoy HP/HG at all, but I must admit you put forth a lovely argument. I absolutely adore your Draco-cold, calculating, but with hints of compassion that you can tell will spill into adoration for the right woman. Nice to see him logically decide his stance on the coming war, so many mire him in pureblood superiority or a bid for power that they forget that his character hints more to survival and personal gain rather than glorified ideals. I enjoy watching the two flirt back and forth as well as flit between what they want and what the gifts could give them-thank you for making it only one gift-all would be a bit much. Can\'t wait to see what Hermione chooses although I have to say I cannot see her choosing the Slytherin gift and Harry and then being happy for long especially following him hitting her in the carriage. Spur of the moment or not, that was out of bounds. If they do it once, the risk is too great-and she is far too intelligent not to realize that. I have to agree with Draco-she would covet the Ravenclaw gift far more. And although I am resigned to more HP/HG I must admit to hoping she ends up with this version of Draco-I can see them being quite well matched!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story, but i really don\'t want herm to take the slytherin gift. i hope you will take a completely unexpected turn and have her take the ravenclaw or gryfindor gift where she could learn all new ways to make harry want her. can\'t you see her soaking up the knowledge of the malfoy dark arts books? hmmm, interesting and something to think about, i hope! great job!!!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuor story is so great, I love it. I usually don\'t reveiw but I love this story so much. I hope it will be Hermione and Draco in the end, I love them together, but I also like the whole thing with Harry too, but I\'m still hoping for a D/Hr story in the end. Keep writing and hope to se an undate soon. :)
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yummy.plz update soon!
what a story
what a story
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I wonder how Harry\'s going to react? Plus Ginny? And how their going to react to finding out that they\'re slaves? Will Ginny accept or decline?
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! So Malfoy found something in her background? : )~
Definitely an interesting story, a unique storyline. I look forward to seeing more.
kiri
Definitely an interesting story, a unique storyline. I look forward to seeing more.
kiri
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holly crap you update fast. This story just gets more fasinating. Thanks.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are blowing my mind. Very complicating and interesting story you\'ve got going. I look forward to more as you have the chance to update. Thanks.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fun, great prank and then OMG was it Ron or Harry? Yikes. Thanks.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the story line is amazing. there is no other word for it. i\'m really interested at how things will develop. this looks like a harry hermione story and that pleases me greatly, but there is so much room for draco to step in. i feel ginny may have her heart broken though. that\'s sad. but there are a few things that make this story come down a notch. spelling still is an issue. there are many spelling errors. also, a few grammatical errors too. i don\'t wha what you think, and i\'m basically a hypocrite for saying this since i don\'t use one, but maybe you should find an editor (i can\'t get it into my head to say beta. lol) i\'m sure you could find one easily. hey, here\'s my application. just a thought.