rate_review Reviews

I must say that you were very complete on your research. It was very well written and very informative to those who would like to learn about sex-magic. Nicely done.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

(Absolutely sated sigh, sprawled out on the floor in serene voluptuousness...)

That is your ONLY fic?!!!

*dies*

It CAN'T be!!! You write so well!!!

*grovels*

We need more of the spiritual sexuality that explores the deeper recesses of our sensual potential. Not just the easy, meaningless shag that is so prevalent in fanfiction, but unusual, unique and inspirational writings of deep feeling with deep healing.

(Basically... write more!!!)

Please?

XD

Sexy and sweet and tender. This story was a delight.
Thank you.

I much as I was impressed with the story and how it was written, I think the fact that you had references impressed me more. Though I\'ve got a suggestion. When the are finally ready to let go and complete the act, you should probably hold out the moment a bit more, not just have it as an say one word and it\'s going. Don\'t get me wrong I loved the story, but I thought the tension could have been built up a bit more for a more dramatic effect. Eitehr way I loved it and was very impressed with your research and the fact that you didn\'t let that research bog down the whole thing (many writers I know take (usually newly acquired) knowlege and force it upon the reader when it shouldn\'t be there and it makes the story boring, but the way you did it was very nice. I love the idea that Harry was holding onto his pain also. Great story.

-BlackCat9

Daaaaaamn, that was good... I need a cold shower...