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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It keeps getting better and better! Just one thing - it\'s vial, not vile. Vial - used to store potions. Vile - disgusting. Sorry, that was driving me bonkers! :)
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What is Severus doing? Harry, Ron and Hermione in bed together this just so different. Thanks for the upate.
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story! I can\'t wait to see how everything plays out! Update soon!
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more, and soon
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February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!! I absolutely love what you are doing with this story. The high emotions, the drama, and suspense. All of it is jus incredible.
eagerly awaiting an update,
Merrideth
eagerly awaiting an update,
Merrideth
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and sad. Please update soon!!! The tension between Hermione and Snape is well written, but your style can be a little stilted at time. Overall, it\'s very nicely written, and I\'m enjoying it quite a bit.
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February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was good, however, your Hermione isn\'t quite in character. I trust that her cousin\'s illness is the reason why she is so insolent to Professor Snape. I await more.