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for Deliver Me

by TriniMinx

person Snapeaholic
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chappie! It just gets better and better. UPDATE SOON!!!
person spaz141
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes, I\'m confused but that\'s what makes reading so much fun. Thanks.
person ArienAstera
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Great chapter. Just one thing. Whatever little twist you just added at the end of 11...it hasn\'t quite...clicked. Could you maybe explain it s.l.o.w.l.y. in a authors note or something. (I can be dense at times) Just to make sure I understand it right. Please continue quickly, its great :D
person LaviniaSavant
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoyed the extended exchange between H and S which contained only their speech. so much fanfiction is overdescribed, this part really was both humorous and insightful to the characters. keep up the good work.
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fan-fucking-tastic! UPDATE SOON!!!! Love this story!
person nesscafe
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap! Now what\'s going to happen!? It\'s bad enough those two are a mess w/out Ron making things worse! Ugh!
person Red Witing Hood
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...VERY evil ending...love it...love it a lot...Cant wait to see what happens now!

Red
person spaz141
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my, fasinating. thanks.
person spaz141
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
weird or is it wierd, interesting. thanks.
person seraph
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, please, please write more!! That was a wonderful snape/hermione story...you captured them brilliantly. Please write more!