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for Deliver Me

by TriniMinx

person laceyweasley
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it is a wonderful story and you shouldn\'t let the nit-pickers get to you.

I hope you update.
person Shiro Ryu
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Lots of twists and turns (hope it all turns out well in the end! LOL) ^_^
Anyway, I hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!
Thank you.
person Kuronekosama90
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i LURVELS this fic. its REALLY well done. the part where Hermione attacks snape and yells at him, i was starting to tear (amazing since apparently, im a cold person, my family tells me so). keep going!! update SOON!

Neko
person Static Wolf
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...AWESOME story, the letters are probably meant to kill them or something? Are they going to open them and be blasted? Or maybe Hermione will walk in the room in time to stop them? What did Severus do? Will we ever find out? I LOVE Severus, he is the type of guy that I want. Strong, mysterious, alluring, dark, and full of secrets. I hope I can find a guy like that. This y isy is way AWESOME, it is about 11:00pm central time here and I have been up for 36 hours, and I have to do thundrundry, and take a bath before I go to bed and get up at 8 am. Oh well I will live, Severus and Hermione will get together right? Maybe you could have them finally talk about things and work together to stop the Death Eaters. Or maybe they should get together and Severus is made to do something horrible to Hermione... Yea okay I am going to stop my rambling, AWESOME story, I myself am a Slytherin. And my three favorite Slytherins are Severus (of course), Draco(when he isn\'t whimpering like a school girl, gods I hated that) and Lucius (only when he isn\'t evil father). I can\'t stress enough that this was a TOTALLY SPECTACTULAR story, the plot is great, the suspense, and the fights between Severus and Hermione. I have never liked Bella, maybe have Hermione kill her in spite, oh yea I forgot to stop rambling. UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!! ^_^
~Static Wolf
person AJ
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely fantastic!
i stayed up for 7 hours reading this.
the relationships between the characters are SO well thought out, as is the story line.
i recommend this story to anyone and everyone.

cant wait for the next chapters...
person Danielle
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will probably review this chapter a couple of times over, at the various places it is placed, I love it that much! I am so happy that you have named Ginny her proper name, props to you! But isnt 41 - 19 only 21? This is a fantastic story, keep writing! I cant wait to see what happens next!
person spaz141
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update, loved the Severus insight from Minerva. Ginerva, pretty yucky, but JKR is the billionaire, so she must be doing something right LOL.
person tschaem
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there

Great story - all these up and downs. I\'m wondering where the two will land... So, I just can\'t wait to read more, but take your time.

Greez from Switzerland
tschaem
person spaz141
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m having a lot of trouble with the review process...anyway here goes again. I like the story, I\'m enjoying the read. Grammar isn\'t screaming at me, however, if you\'d like another beta I\'d be happy to help. I am a document editor in RL and currently beta for two other authors. Feel free to e-mail me. Thanks.
person sushified
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM