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September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey-
I love the story keep up the good work. I didn't take your review as a flame at all. but it seems that no one is getting the fact that its an AU story and i'm working on explaining for those that don't understand. i put up the flame warning bc i did get one when i asked that flames be emailed not posted because it's between me and them. but yes she does have a mother and it's in chapter 2 and i mentioned her again in chapter 3. can't wait to read more of your story tho!
-Kay_Peace
I love the story keep up the good work. I didn't take your review as a flame at all. but it seems that no one is getting the fact that its an AU story and i'm working on explaining for those that don't understand. i put up the flame warning bc i did get one when i asked that flames be emailed not posted because it's between me and them. but yes she does have a mother and it's in chapter 2 and i mentioned her again in chapter 3. can't wait to read more of your story tho!
-Kay_Peace
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I'm reading your rewrite and the story so far is very good. But, you double-posted chapter XVI - new beginnings and didn't post chapter XV. I hope you post chapter XV soon so I can continue to enjoy this story.
Thanks
I'm reading your rewrite and the story so far is very good. But, you double-posted chapter XVI - new beginnings and didn't post chapter XV. I hope you post chapter XV soon so I can continue to enjoy this story.
Thanks
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July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is midnight and I just finished your story. I loved it and I had to review and tell you so. The interaction between Severus and Hermione was perfect, dark and sexy at the same time. I love your plot too, very original. Thanks for finishing this... it was great!
-MA
-MA
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July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i loved this story i stay up till 1am jst to finish reading it...so that says it was gud...mind u there where a few things where u hadn't finished words so i had to guess at what they were so u might want to go thru it ur self n find them n fix them so i can read it agen with the right words not jst wat i think the words r
Luvya Aya
P.S keep going with the r writing ur gud n i hope there's a sequal to this one at some point
Luvya Aya
P.S keep going with the r writing ur gud n i hope there's a sequal to this one at some point
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! I can't wait for the update! Do you have a mailing list to let us know when you have updated? If you do put me on it please!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think it\'s good but it\'s soooooooooooo strung out. u have repeated the same phrases and situations looooads of times.
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February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sorry but your grammer and spelling make this story almost impossible to read.
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
He loves her, she loved him, suddenly, he hates her, she hates him. Rinse and repeat. Oh, wait, now she\'s sick again and he\'s taking care of her. The spiral continues....so it\'s time for me to get off and find a story that\'s not so redundant. Honestly. How can one character find another sexy when to the reader she seems like a boring, whiner with mood swings?