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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Is Draco really a bad guy? He seems more like a confused little boy. I truly hope that he doesn\'t
plan to have Harry killed when he\'s \"done\" with him.
plan to have Harry killed when he\'s \"done\" with him.
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter great great chapter. at least harry got some pleaseure out of this even if it was against his will. will he ever give it freely. any way i hope you update soon!!
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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wo, dude, that was ...
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wefgwqergwerge
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A riv riveting slave story. Please do continue. Post soon.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m having trouble understanding the world in which this is taking place. Is Malfoy really nice to his slaves?
What was Draco dreaming about? Why would Lucius get mad if Draco hurt Harry? I\'m sure these things will be
explained sooner or later. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.
What was Draco dreaming about? Why would Lucius get mad if Draco hurt Harry? I\'m sure these things will be
explained sooner or later. I\'ll be waiting for the next chapter.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your so EVIL! Not that I don\'t think Draco deserved to be punished for what he did to Harry, but how long must Draco deny the fact that HE LOVES HIM!!!! LOL! Okay, please, please, please CONTINUE! I love this story so much! And don\'t worry, I haven\'t seen a lot of problems with your grammer! By the way, what\'s your native language? One last thing....are you planning on ever having a Draco P.O.V.? THANKS FOR THE WONDERFUL WORK!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great up date! Interessting turning of the plot!
Some how it still disturbs me that you seem to know so well how it would feel to get raped....
I hope some how Harry and Draco will learn from the other and get out of that mess!!!
Love to read more
Love
Hexia
Some how it still disturbs me that you seem to know so well how it would feel to get raped....
I hope some how Harry and Draco will learn from the other and get out of that mess!!!
Love to read more
Love
Hexia
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m impressed. Really impressed. These kind of fics show what would happen if Harry and Draco were to be together in \'that\' way. I\'m kinda tired of all this \"I\'ll never join the dark side, I hate my daddy, Let\'s run away together\" fluffy shit. No offense of course to those who\'ve gots lis like that, I love all H/D stories! Anyways, please keep going!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story, it should be continued in a longer version i think, as to include all the appropriate detail and all. I think you should address, more of Draco\'s feeling for Harry, and not so much the recapture of Harry like that other reveiwer suggested. Draco is the one in controll, but from the way you are writing it, it seems that Harry also has some control over Draco as well, from the feelings that he elicts from him. So thas where i think you should take your story angle from. i hope you update soon! i really enjoy reading this story.