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for Fallen

by Cherish

person alex
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh... that was so sad! *crys*. that was so sweet, and the songs fit it so well.. i hope that you update the next chapter soon, i really am looking forward to how this story turns out... i love your writing. Thnak you for posting your great work.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so sad. I thought that was a great chapter. This chapter was the perfect turning point for the fic.
Now we (and Harry) know that Draco has a heart after all. We get to understand him better. And now the boys
can help each other. :)
person krys
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how could you leave it off like that? course that means that you\'ve succeded once again on a mind blowing chapter.. although there we some spelling/grammer mistakes here or there, they could be overlooked unless you were really picky.. =] do you have a beta that you sent your stuff to? j/w it\'s always good to have a second set of eyes look at your finished product. heh.. such unoriginal advice that i give... ahh well update soon! =]
person krys
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
how could you leave it off like that? course that means that you\'ve succeded oncain ain on a mind blowing chapter.. although there we some spelling/grammer mistakes here or there, they could be overlooked unless you were really picky.. =] do you have a beta that you sent your stuff to? j/w it\'s always good to have a second set of eyes look at your finished product. heh.. such unoriginal advice that i give... ahh well update soon! =]
person Lady S
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow what can I say. Your story is very good and so sad. What will Draco do. I can\'t wait for your update.
person alex
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! harry, can\'t be dead! please don\'t let harry be dead... thas so sad... :( oh.. please update soon, don\'t leave me in suspense.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It would be so nice if this fic could have a happy ending. I\'m not holding my breath, but it really
would be nice... I feel so bad for both of the boys.
person MidnightMoon
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re doing an excellent job on this story! Oh my god, the suspense is killing me, thank you so much for updating finally! This chapter was just brilliant and so damn good. Please continue with the next chapter. (And my heart goes out to Draco and his misery.) I\'m starting to love this story!
person Dragonpet
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you have written so far.
please post another cer. er.
I\'d like to know what happens to Harry.
I\'m starting to wonder if Draco\'s in love with him.
Cause he sure was acting like it in the last chapter.
Anyways please post another chapter soon.

MUCH LOVE
DragonPet
person krys
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter =] definately a good story. I\'m not quite sure if i\'ve reviewed on this or not before.. since i dont\' usually come to aff that often.. perhaps once a month. I just had to see if you had updated though! xP I liked how you characterized Harry in this chapter, he wouldn\'t give in, no matter what. I sort of see Harry like that now. Will he ever give in? I doubt Draco would give in first though O.o;; Usually those turn out real badly. Perhaps you can pull it off? =] g\'luck with the chapters to come and update soon!